This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Tommy To The Rescue"Third book in the time travel trilogy
41 total reviews
Comment from apky
This edge of the seat for the readers is definitely your sole kingdom, Sandra. Mildred is saved and now she and Veronica face fresh dangers. How will it work out for them? Nothing to do but wait for the next post!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
  |
This edge of the seat for the readers is definitely your sole kingdom, Sandra. Mildred is saved and now she and Veronica face fresh dangers. How will it work out for them? Nothing to do but wait for the next post!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
-
LOL, thank you, Aki, I love that review, even though its giving me more pressure!! Thanks so much, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from tfawcus
You certainly know how to leave your readers hanging! There I was, thinking that everyone was now safe, and you drop that little bombshell at the end.( Perhaps that's not the right metaphor in the circumstances! LOL)
The pace of your writing in this chapter intensifies the sense of urgency. Graphic descriptions take us right into the action.
So glad that the lad got his watch back!
I can't imagine that they are all going to perish, but with the fireball having consumed all the oxygen at the entrance, and a dead-end where they'd hoped and expected the exit to be, things are looking a bit bleak.
Perhaps it's a good time for a rousing chorus of Rock Of Ages, Cleft For Me.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
 |
You certainly know how to leave your readers hanging! There I was, thinking that everyone was now safe, and you drop that little bombshell at the end.( Perhaps that's not the right metaphor in the circumstances! LOL)
The pace of your writing in this chapter intensifies the sense of urgency. Graphic descriptions take us right into the action.
So glad that the lad got his watch back!
I can't imagine that they are all going to perish, but with the fireball having consumed all the oxygen at the entrance, and a dead-end where they'd hoped and expected the exit to be, things are looking a bit bleak.
Perhaps it's a good time for a rousing chorus of Rock Of Ages, Cleft For Me.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
-
LOL, I love that 'bombshell!! LOL. Thank you so much for the lovely stars, Tony, and this fabulous review., I might have them singing that in the next part, lol, that's if they feel like having a good old sing-song! Thanks again, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Rhonda Skinner
Another cliff hanger ending. Good job. As usual, very well written and held my interest throughout. I'm glad Mildred made it. I'd miss her if she'd been squished.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
|
Another cliff hanger ending. Good job. As usual, very well written and held my interest throughout. I'm glad Mildred made it. I'd miss her if she'd been squished.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
-
Thank you for this lovely review, Rhonda. I do like cliff hangers, I keep thinking of how it was when I was a child and went to saturday morning cinema, there was always a cliff hanger to bring the kids back the next week. lol! Big hugs my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from rwilliam
OH NO! They're all trapped.
Man you have me believing it's real and happening. I love that. I love being able to crawl into a book and getting lost in that world. It's so fun. I love it.
I can't wait to read more. Good job. :)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
|
OH NO! They're all trapped.
Man you have me believing it's real and happening. I love that. I love being able to crawl into a book and getting lost in that world. It's so fun. I love it.
I can't wait to read more. Good job. :)
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
-
Aww, Rebecca, that is the nicest thing any author could wish for, a review like yours. Thank you so very much, my friend. And a huge hug for the 6 stars. Next part coming soon. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
More bad news. DARN!!!! I want everybody to be safe. You did a wonderful job writing this and the emotion is perfect. I couldn't take my eyes from the writing. Okay, now what???
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
|
More bad news. DARN!!!! I want everybody to be safe. You did a wonderful job writing this and the emotion is perfect. I couldn't take my eyes from the writing. Okay, now what???
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
-
Thank you so much, Barbara, for the lovely six stars, and wonderful review! Well, Veronica has to make sure the time-line isn't changed, so she has to stop the Vice Admiral. That'll be fun, but first she has to help Mildred save everyone in the passage if she can. :) Big hugs, my friend, :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Sandra,
What an excellent chapter. Yes, I loved the action and the dialogue. But what stood out for me in this well-written chapter is your scenic description. Rich in visual imagery. Truly added to the suspense of the action. I truly enjoyed reading along and wondering what is going to happen next.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
|
Hello Sandra,
What an excellent chapter. Yes, I loved the action and the dialogue. But what stood out for me in this well-written chapter is your scenic description. Rich in visual imagery. Truly added to the suspense of the action. I truly enjoyed reading along and wondering what is going to happen next.
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2019
-
Thank you so much, Diane, for this really lovely review. I'm delighted you enjoyed all the descriptions, it took me ages to get this right. :)) Big hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from SLMorrical
Yeah Mildred is saved. Now Veronica and Mildred could die. You are definitely keeping me on the edge of my seat. I was expecting Veronica go back to the future after she saw Tommy pull Mildred up and saved her. So now it is still not known if they make it. Veronica has to make it she is in the future. Very well done.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
|
Yeah Mildred is saved. Now Veronica and Mildred could die. You are definitely keeping me on the edge of my seat. I was expecting Veronica go back to the future after she saw Tommy pull Mildred up and saved her. So now it is still not known if they make it. Veronica has to make it she is in the future. Very well done.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
-
Thank you for this lovely insightful review, my friend. Veronica can't be hurt anyway because she's a bit like a ghost, not wholly there. Nothing can touch her. But, Mildred is a solid person and can be. We will see what happens in the next part. Thanks again, I really appreciate your support. :)) Sandra xxx
-
I didn't realize Veronica is a ghost, I thought she was solid like a real person. Thank you for straighten that out for me.
-
No, she's not a ghost, but when she is sent back in time, she doesn't have a solid body, a ghost was the only way I could explain it. lol. :) xx
-
Okay thanks.
Comment from Joy Graham
Oh my, you have your hands full with this situation. I can see why the Powers that Be sent you in and not me. I wouldn't have a clue what to do. Your Veronica seems to be level headed and a smart thinker.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
|
Oh my, you have your hands full with this situation. I can see why the Powers that Be sent you in and not me. I wouldn't have a clue what to do. Your Veronica seems to be level headed and a smart thinker.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Joy xx
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
-
Thank you so much, Joy! Veronica is level-headed, and Mildred has some surprising sides, too. But one thing will never change, and that's Mildred's loyalty and love for Veronica and her family, and theirs for her. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying this story, it will be the last one. I think I'll quite miss them, Quite sad, aren't I? LOL Thanks my friend. :) Sandra xx .
Comment from TheStoryMan
Thank you Tommy! I sure hope that door is fireproof. If not they'll all be killed. The powers that be wouldn't do that would they? This is a very suspenseful book.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
|
Thank you Tommy! I sure hope that door is fireproof. If not they'll all be killed. The powers that be wouldn't do that would they? This is a very suspenseful book.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
-
The powers-that-be will be in for a tongue lashing if they aren't careful. It's just lucky Veronica and Mildred don't know who or where they are! lol. Thank you so much, Ron, for this lovely review. I appreciate your support. I'm really pleased you are enjoying it. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from royowen
I like the way you leave it open ended, with another potential disaster in the offing. That's the way to keep us on the hop, threes one thing that makes me hopeful, you're an incurable romantic. Isn't it funny? Even though it's fiction, we forget we're all at the mercy of the author's whim. Heh heh, well done, Sandra, great write, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
|
I like the way you leave it open ended, with another potential disaster in the offing. That's the way to keep us on the hop, threes one thing that makes me hopeful, you're an incurable romantic. Isn't it funny? Even though it's fiction, we forget we're all at the mercy of the author's whim. Heh heh, well done, Sandra, great write, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2019
-
LOL! You know me too well, Roy, I love this review, lol. It's so nice, and, yes, I'm a romantic, and you're a big softy, my dear friend. I'm sure the ladies, little one and the grown up ones in your family, can twist you around their little fingers!! lol. Thank you so much for another of your delightful reviews! Big hugs, :)) Sandra xx
-
You know me well Sandrw
-
LOL, xxx