This Time - That Time 3
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Wake Up, Mummy!"Third book in the time travel trilogy
40 total reviews
Comment from Teresa Alford
I find the story intriguing. I will definitely have to go back to read the previous chapters. Outstanding writing. Your story is very succinct. It is easy to read and to follow.
BTW, congratulations on having your book published!! TA ";~)
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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I find the story intriguing. I will definitely have to go back to read the previous chapters. Outstanding writing. Your story is very succinct. It is easy to read and to follow.
BTW, congratulations on having your book published!! TA ";~)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2019
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Aw thank you so much, Teresa, for this lovely review and the lovely stars. Your comments are so nice, and I really appreciate them. Thanks also for the congrats! Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Wabigoon
Sandra--
Excellent. Not UK English as much as Kate Atkinson, I must say. Or, maybe hers is Scottish English?
Who are The Powers That Be? Do you experience anything like this? Have you read any Anthony Peake concerning the multiple possible realities he believes we exist in?
I saw no "nits," maybe a couple of vaguely "clumsy" spots. Not enough to note.
Good luck with your books.
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Sandra--
Excellent. Not UK English as much as Kate Atkinson, I must say. Or, maybe hers is Scottish English?
Who are The Powers That Be? Do you experience anything like this? Have you read any Anthony Peake concerning the multiple possible realities he believes we exist in?
I saw no "nits," maybe a couple of vaguely "clumsy" spots. Not enough to note.
Good luck with your books.
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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I think you might find Kate is Scottish English and it is different, as is the North of England to the South of England where I live. Thank you so much, Wabigoon, for the lovely 6 stars and for the fabulous review. The Powers That Be are like time watchers, who keep an eye on the time-line, no one gets to meet them. I do believe there are multiple realities and we do move on from here when we have used up our physical bodies. I will find out one day! LOL I will take a look at Anthony Peake's book, he sounds interesting. Your theories are too, I can't wait to read your next piece. Thanks again, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Gert sherwood
My goodness
Without a doubt you knew how to keep this chapter going and getting more intense when Veronica is very worried about Mildred going back it the past and wondering if Mildred was there at the time when the hospital was hit.
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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My goodness
Without a doubt you knew how to keep this chapter going and getting more intense when Veronica is very worried about Mildred going back it the past and wondering if Mildred was there at the time when the hospital was hit.
Gert
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much for the six stars, Gert, and the lovely review. That is so nice of you. Veronica is very worried about Mildred, they've been friends now for such a long time. We'll see what happens next time. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are welcome Sandra Gert
Comment from Mistydawn
The story is really getting intese now with everything going on. Poor Mildred has a hard task at hand. Your story is well-written very interesting, it grabed my attention in the beginning and held it to the end. Great job as always.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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The story is really getting intese now with everything going on. Poor Mildred has a hard task at hand. Your story is well-written very interesting, it grabed my attention in the beginning and held it to the end. Great job as always.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Yes, it's hard for Mildred, but she doesn't know the full extent of it yet! lol. Veronica need to get back to her, she can only wait for the powers to send her though. Thank you so much for the lovely six stars and the fabulous review, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You left a wonderful hook. Everybody will be back to read and see what happens to Mildred. We also need to know how the Admiral gong to be killed off. I can't wait.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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You left a wonderful hook. Everybody will be back to read and see what happens to Mildred. We also need to know how the Admiral gong to be killed off. I can't wait.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Thank you so very much, Barbara! What a lovely review, I do hope they will come back, lol. Thanks for the super six, my friend, and the lovely review. Big hugs :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Rob Caudle
Sandra, this was really good as you pointed out the last time I am well behind but your writing is so well penned I have had no trouble catching well that and I went back and read a few bits. I love the way you can blend normal life moments and keep the tension in your story. I have been blessed this Sunday morning you Sarah and bob all had new pieces up there are others too I am of to read. Well done.
Rob
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Sandra, this was really good as you pointed out the last time I am well behind but your writing is so well penned I have had no trouble catching well that and I went back and read a few bits. I love the way you can blend normal life moments and keep the tension in your story. I have been blessed this Sunday morning you Sarah and bob all had new pieces up there are others too I am of to read. Well done.
Rob
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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What a lovely review, Rob, thank you so very much! I'm so pleased you are enjoying my story, a big hug for the 6 stars!! I'm following Sarah, she is an excellent author. I have Bob's Falling Up Stairs, I don't know if you read, it? Another good book. I'm so pleased you went back and read some other parts, it does make it easier to understand. Thanks again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed this chapter, Sandra. I like the way you set it mostly in the present but with bits of intrigue from the past. I like the interaction with James, Veronica, and the children. I like the way you described Mildred floating in and out. You set up the next chapter well. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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I enjoyed this chapter, Sandra. I like the way you set it mostly in the present but with bits of intrigue from the past. I like the interaction with James, Veronica, and the children. I like the way you described Mildred floating in and out. You set up the next chapter well. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Thank you so much, Jan, for another really lovely review. It's so nice to know you are enjoying my story, I so appreciate you. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from aryr
An exciting chapter Sandra. So much activity going on with Mildred being stuck in an alternative time. Little Ann is great in that she got her mum when she saw Mildred. Veronica unfortunately has another train of thought which could affect James, the bombing of the hospital. James is correct that Veronica only has to think things out and she will be able to solve the mystery. Very enjoyable to read, it makes the reader think, well done. Hugs and smiles.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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An exciting chapter Sandra. So much activity going on with Mildred being stuck in an alternative time. Little Ann is great in that she got her mum when she saw Mildred. Veronica unfortunately has another train of thought which could affect James, the bombing of the hospital. James is correct that Veronica only has to think things out and she will be able to solve the mystery. Very enjoyable to read, it makes the reader think, well done. Hugs and smiles.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Things are certainly changing, but Veronica feels left out and is getting very angry. Well see how she gets on in the next part. Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend. Big hugs. Sandra xxxx
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You are so welcome Sandra, is it possible that Veronica is jealous? Just a thought.
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LOL! Veronica jealous? I'd not thought of that. Who knows? I'll have a quiet word and try to find out!! LOL.
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Ahaaa I have given you another possible twist.
Comment from SLMorrical
This Chapter follows well after the last chapter. I find that hard to do at times. I still have trouble with time travel, but you have and are continuing to write it well. Have you ever seen the show Outlander? It does a bunch of jumping around in time. I am wondering if Mildred was really there or a ghost of herself. I have heard it said that ghost are just another plane of existence. Is your time travel just that another plane of existence. Also her seeing Mildred and than waking up is like being in a dream state and seeing her. I did like how you wrote this chapter. I was glued and wanted to read more. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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This Chapter follows well after the last chapter. I find that hard to do at times. I still have trouble with time travel, but you have and are continuing to write it well. Have you ever seen the show Outlander? It does a bunch of jumping around in time. I am wondering if Mildred was really there or a ghost of herself. I have heard it said that ghost are just another plane of existence. Is your time travel just that another plane of existence. Also her seeing Mildred and than waking up is like being in a dream state and seeing her. I did like how you wrote this chapter. I was glued and wanted to read more. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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That is such a lovely, encouraging review, thank you so very much. Mildred is an enigma, she died at the end of the last book, but the Powers-that-be brought her back as her younger self to continue working with Veronica for this last assignment. Veronica was taken back in the first book to show her how cruel she was to an older woman who had suffered a lot of abuse from her father-in-law. (not sexual) Since then, the Powers have used her to sort out possible problems that could alter the time line. This one is her hardest and final case. I'm so pleased you are enjoying it, and yes, I have seen the first series of the Outlander, it's a terrific show, and I used to watch Quantum Leap, which was also one of my favorites. I do like time travel, and have tried to write my own in a different way to any one else's. To have you say you was glued and wanted to read more, totally made my day. Thank you! :) Sandra xx
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You are welcome. I use to watch Quantum Leap also. I like how it would use the story line to explain something in the past, and how it came about. Like the Halloween episode and Steven King.
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Yes, I remember that episode. This book I'm writing now, started off with the suffragettes and a character called Gladys whose husband really didn't approve of what she was doing. He is the Vice Admiral who would be responsible for changing the outcome of the war by altering the Jutland sea battle to another area. So, it's all fun ahead. I love Steven King's book, well, some of them!
Comment from damommy
Oh, no! It can't be that Mildred was bombed. The Power That Be better straighten this out and fast. Don't make me find them. lol. I'm glad Veronica didn't step through then. It might have been the end of her ever returning. What an exciting chapter.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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Oh, no! It can't be that Mildred was bombed. The Power That Be better straighten this out and fast. Don't make me find them. lol. I'm glad Veronica didn't step through then. It might have been the end of her ever returning. What an exciting chapter.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2019
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This is the problem that Veronica has at the moment, she doesn't know! Thank you so very much for the lovely 6 stars, my dear friend, and for this fabulous review. I really appreciate both, and you! Biggest hugs, Sandra xxx