A Halloween Tale
contest27 total reviews
Comment from Mistydawn
I absolutely love this. It's so well-written, descriptive, interesting, suspenseful, had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. your artwork, fonts are perfect and the sound effects that only added to the fright. Wonderful job. Good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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I absolutely love this. It's so well-written, descriptive, interesting, suspenseful, had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. your artwork, fonts are perfect and the sound effects that only added to the fright. Wonderful job. Good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much, Misty, I'm thrilled you liked it. I greatly appreciate the kind review and stars.
Happy Halloween!
Comment from Cass Carlton
There is one Spag(I think) Very should be Every?? Apart from that this is as scary and Hallowe'enish as anything I've ever met. The sound effects are magnificent. You have a talent for scaring the daylights out of anyone. The singers are very Gothic, then creaking doors, shrieks and slow, deadly footsteps. The artwork is perfect, the poem speaks of hanging corpses and hungry ghouls. Brrrr!! Well done . cheers Cass
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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There is one Spag(I think) Very should be Every?? Apart from that this is as scary and Hallowe'enish as anything I've ever met. The sound effects are magnificent. You have a talent for scaring the daylights out of anyone. The singers are very Gothic, then creaking doors, shrieks and slow, deadly footsteps. The artwork is perfect, the poem speaks of hanging corpses and hungry ghouls. Brrrr!! Well done . cheers Cass
Comment Written 31-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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You've made my day, Cass, I'm thrilled you enjoyed this piece. I'm gratful for the wonderful review and stars, Thank you.
Happy Halloween!
Thanks for the SPAG tip, must of lost the E during edits. lol
Comment from fm wright
A truly excellent Halloween Poetry Contest entry. It has everything in it to give one a fright. It rhymes and flows well. I know of nothing to add to it or subtract from it. T he artwork is also very good indeed. Best of wishes with this delightfully eerie tale.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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A truly excellent Halloween Poetry Contest entry. It has everything in it to give one a fright. It rhymes and flows well. I know of nothing to add to it or subtract from it. T he artwork is also very good indeed. Best of wishes with this delightfully eerie tale.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much, my friend, I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You have written an excellent contest submission. It should do very well in the voting booth. It's sad that Halloween is no longer a kid's holiday. Now, it's for adults in sleazy costumes.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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You have written an excellent contest submission. It should do very well in the voting booth. It's sad that Halloween is no longer a kid's holiday. Now, it's for adults in sleazy costumes.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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That is the truth, Tom. I greatly appreciate your kind review.
Happy Halloween!
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely written Kerry. Your entire presentation is spooky and in just the right spirit for All Hallow's Eve.
Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee with this tasty bite.
Gloria
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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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Very nicely written Kerry. Your entire presentation is spooky and in just the right spirit for All Hallow's Eve.
Best of luck to you with the Contest Committee with this tasty bite.
Gloria
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much, Gloria, I greatly appreciate your kind comments.
Happy Halloween!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Truly, and indeed, this is a Halloween tale, presented in a real term of appreciation; I liked the taletelling and enjoyed the read in fantastic rhymes; well said, well done. Write More Inspire More -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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Truly, and indeed, this is a Halloween tale, presented in a real term of appreciation; I liked the taletelling and enjoyed the read in fantastic rhymes; well said, well done. Write More Inspire More -- DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 31-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much, my friend, I appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from Cybertron1986
Truly an eerie and frightening poem that infused a sense of a quality Halloween tale that would succeed in scaring any Trick-or-Treater! A strong and quality poem that deserves far more than what I am allowed to give. Well done
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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Truly an eerie and frightening poem that infused a sense of a quality Halloween tale that would succeed in scaring any Trick-or-Treater! A strong and quality poem that deserves far more than what I am allowed to give. Well done
Comment Written 31-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2018
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Oh my goodness, I'm honored for your wonderful review and stars. I'm thrilled you liked it. Thank you so much.
Have a Happy Halloween!