A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Deceit"Assorted poems of love
36 total reviews
Comment from MelB
Welcome back! This is a fantastic poem. Great descriptions and imagery. Love the artwork too. I think I've dated a guy like this more than once!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Welcome back! This is a fantastic poem. Great descriptions and imagery. Love the artwork too. I think I've dated a guy like this more than once!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Hi, Mel. It is great to be back. I am delighted at the reception this piece has received. Thank you for this lovely R&R.
Always,
Missy
Comment from RChapman
:( You and many others. Your feelings are shared honestly in your poetry and you describe a 'typical deceitful man' well. You have managed to write something personal in a general form, that im sure many others will be able to recognise in their own ;deceitful men'.
Rachel
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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:( You and many others. Your feelings are shared honestly in your poetry and you describe a 'typical deceitful man' well. You have managed to write something personal in a general form, that im sure many others will be able to recognise in their own ;deceitful men'.
Rachel
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Hello, Rachel. It is a delight to see the reception my work has received coming back. Thank you :)
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment from Teri7
I am so glad to see you back writing. I truly enjoyed this poem you have penned. It is very sad to me. You used very good descriptive wording and imagery. hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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I am so glad to see you back writing. I truly enjoyed this poem you have penned. It is very sad to me. You used very good descriptive wording and imagery. hugs, Teri
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Hi, Teri. Thanks so much hon for the lovely review. :) Happy to be back.
Missy
Comment from l.raven
HI Missy, saw your name pop up....and smiling ear to ear...missed ya girl...lies come with any and every addiction...it's how they approve what they are doing...they lie to themselves...and deceit follows right behind...very well written sweet girl...picture perrrrfect...love ya Linda xxoo luff
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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HI Missy, saw your name pop up....and smiling ear to ear...missed ya girl...lies come with any and every addiction...it's how they approve what they are doing...they lie to themselves...and deceit follows right behind...very well written sweet girl...picture perrrrfect...love ya Linda xxoo luff
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2016
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Oh Linda, Linda, Linda, You make my heart smile with each review of yours I read :)
Thank you hon for the warm welcome and lovely review.
Missy
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LOL...you are so welcome sweet girl...I am so glad I can make you heart smile...you make mine smile as well...xxoo love
Comment from aryr
Definitely an interesting poem that addresses the intense cruelty of the reality of life. The stages of the attraction of addiction are as real to the sufferer as they could be. The picture creates the sense of conflict. Great job, thanks.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Definitely an interesting poem that addresses the intense cruelty of the reality of life. The stages of the attraction of addiction are as real to the sufferer as they could be. The picture creates the sense of conflict. Great job, thanks.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Aryr, thank you for such a positive review.
Always,
Missy
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You are welcome Missy
Comment from Jay Squires
I enjoyed your romp into poetry. THis one was a double whammy: the first being what I thought was a confessional of a romance gone sour; the second turned on the word "Addiction" (of which there are countless varieties) none of which is healthy. Then I remembered, Missy is probably exercising the poetry dimension to study the human condition. Any way you cut it, it's good writing--for this person who hardly ever reviews poetry.
BTW, your vacation from FS must have coincided with mine. I was gone all of October, working on my play.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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I enjoyed your romp into poetry. THis one was a double whammy: the first being what I thought was a confessional of a romance gone sour; the second turned on the word "Addiction" (of which there are countless varieties) none of which is healthy. Then I remembered, Missy is probably exercising the poetry dimension to study the human condition. Any way you cut it, it's good writing--for this person who hardly ever reviews poetry.
BTW, your vacation from FS must have coincided with mine. I was gone all of October, working on my play.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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First, a play? Now now aren't you just all kinds of awesome :)
Thank you for this lovely review my sweet friend.
Always,
Missy
Comment from Mastery
Welcome back, Missy! I have missed you. Saw you on facebook a lot but not here.
This poem is sad but emotionally charged in a lot of ways.
Especially these lines:
"But now,
The bruises to my soul
Are harder to
Hide"
Bravo! Goodm to see you back. :) X Bob
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Welcome back, Missy! I have missed you. Saw you on facebook a lot but not here.
This poem is sad but emotionally charged in a lot of ways.
Especially these lines:
"But now,
The bruises to my soul
Are harder to
Hide"
Bravo! Goodm to see you back. :) X Bob
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Hello my brilliant author friend. Thank you, for such a sweet "welcome back " and review.
Always,
Missy
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X :) Bob
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Thanks so much, Missy. X bob
Comment from Ulla
Hi Missy, you are back!!! Thought you'd gone for good. So glad you're back with us again, and with a wonderful poem. Nothing worse than a two faced person. Not nice at all. Especially if you fall in love. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Hi Missy, you are back!!! Thought you'd gone for good. So glad you're back with us again, and with a wonderful poem. Nothing worse than a two faced person. Not nice at all. Especially if you fall in love. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Hi gawgeous. YES I'm baaack!
Thanks for the warm welcome and lovely review :)
ALWAYS,
Missy
Comment from RoostyNester
It sounds that he was addicted to women. A very revealing poem, of a love that could not last. Well done in style and vision of poem. I liked your poem.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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It sounds that he was addicted to women. A very revealing poem, of a love that could not last. Well done in style and vision of poem. I liked your poem.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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RN, thank you so much for taking your time to leave this lovely R&R
Always,
Missy
Comment from royowen
Yes I agree with you, an attractive face, male or female can be a distraction, but I remember a biblical proverb, "Be as wise as a serpent, but as gentle as a dove" (Matthew 10:16. in other words be wise in the ways of the world, but maintain an outlook of innocence, on can recover eqalibrium. Deceiptfulness can really hurt, but love's wisdom conquers all. Well done, beautifully written and composed, welcome back, missed you, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Yes I agree with you, an attractive face, male or female can be a distraction, but I remember a biblical proverb, "Be as wise as a serpent, but as gentle as a dove" (Matthew 10:16. in other words be wise in the ways of the world, but maintain an outlook of innocence, on can recover eqalibrium. Deceiptfulness can really hurt, but love's wisdom conquers all. Well done, beautifully written and composed, welcome back, missed you, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2016
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Roy, it's always been a pleasure to see your name in a review of my work. :)
Thank you!
Always,
Missy
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Most welcome Missy