Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Oh my! I read where Michele had shot Edgar and Gloria came to arrest her. My son skyped me and when I came back, an hour later, I was on the wrong section and none of it made sense. Finally I realized you were not at fault, but I was so went back and caught up. Oh my!!! Good job.

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

I went a bit over the top with this. A fun challenge and a fun write. Thanks for a great review. Most appreciated. mikey

Comment from nordicgirl

Exceptional

You dove right into the deep end this time. Love it. I don`t get any of the technical stuff but this is funny as hell especially the insane epilogue. God, you are warped. NG

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

I went a bit over the top with this. A fun challenge and a fun write. Thanks for a great review. Most appreciated. mikey

Comment from brenda bickers

Exceptional

Hi Mikey,
I do not have the foggiest as to what is going on but the conclusion to your story was hilarious. I wish I could have some of what your on, your writing is on fire at the moment.
In true Mikey fashion. I wouldn't expect anything less from you. This was great.
Brenda:))x

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

I went a bit over the top with this. A fun challenge and a fun write. Thanks for a great review. Most appreciated. mikey

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written piece of prose, you did a great job. Even the ghost could not stay out of the action. I need a lot more practice to come up with all the extra flavor to my stories. Lol.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

I went a bit over the top with this. A fun challenge and a fun write. Thanks for a great review. Most appreciated. mikey

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Seriously, MIkey? LOL! This is seriously weird. And the epilogue is definitely on drugs. I'm afraid I'm going to have to arrest the whole story and all its characters. Not to mention the writer. You're gonna do time for this, fella. Seriously. :)

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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

I think locking me up may be the best thing for all concerned. I went a bit over the top with this. A fun challenge and a fun write. Thanks for a great review. Most appreciated. mikey

Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

Mr. Cahill, remind me to wear Depends if I am ever sitting around a dinner table with you! You are so hysterical I might not be able to control my bladder. What's with you and thjs pov crappola!? Na, just funnin with you. Loved every part of this. You are good. Cool dude, cool.

Jimi

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 Comment Written 14-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016

Once again with the unforgettable imagery. LOL I went a bit beyond the scope of the instructions I believe. I do things like that. It's lead me to the level of success I enjoy today. Thanks a bunch, mikey