Tin Condo, Rent Controlled
Story Beginning-Potlatch Challeng27 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Very well-written opening paragraph. Thinking of the end of the world is a very clever idea. It feels like a prediction of some sort, knowing that we are busy killing earth day by day.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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Very well-written opening paragraph. Thinking of the end of the world is a very clever idea. It feels like a prediction of some sort, knowing that we are busy killing earth day by day.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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Thanks so much.
A fun challenge.
mikey :))
Comment from nordicgirl
You are too damn much!!!
You wrote and posted this, picture and all in sixteen minutes? You are a freak, dude. Lol. This is really good with tons of possibilities. Mission accomished. No choice but to read on. NG
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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You are too damn much!!!
You wrote and posted this, picture and all in sixteen minutes? You are a freak, dude. Lol. This is really good with tons of possibilities. Mission accomished. No choice but to read on. NG
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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A great prose challenge I thought. Glad you liked it. Thanks so much, mikey
Comment from barkingdog
I'd read more just to see if they ate each other and who was the last to survive, munching on a thigh bone; or did they find resources where they were--maybe ran into some hot or cool, depending haha, alien chicks and had little chicklings.
More, please.
:) e
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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I'd read more just to see if they ate each other and who was the last to survive, munching on a thigh bone; or did they find resources where they were--maybe ran into some hot or cool, depending haha, alien chicks and had little chicklings.
More, please.
:) e
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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Like the scenarios especially the alien chicks.
A great prose challenge I thought. Glad you liked it. Thanks so much, mikey
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It's possible. You write stuff and people believe it.
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I've heard that, yes.... :))
Comment from Brett Matthew West
A pink Earth would be discerning indeed.
Seems the crew is in for the long haul and "you" desire more adventure than what you foresee in the near future so you volunteer to lead the charge providing reasons why your comrades are not qualified to do so.
This story has many possible directions it could go in from here.
Interesting to see which path you select.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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A pink Earth would be discerning indeed.
Seems the crew is in for the long haul and "you" desire more adventure than what you foresee in the near future so you volunteer to lead the charge providing reasons why your comrades are not qualified to do so.
This story has many possible directions it could go in from here.
Interesting to see which path you select.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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A great prose challenge I thought. Glad you liked it. Thanks so much, mikey
Comment from Bananafish308
Wow, Mikey, that was quick, as usual. I don't know how you come up with these ideas so quickly, but this is a good one, as always! Very intriguing. You certainly grabbed me. Great imagery of a pink earth on its last gasp. And what could be the calamity that destroyed the earth? Nuclear holocaust is the easy guess, but you could go in many directions with this. Great job.
Bill
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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Wow, Mikey, that was quick, as usual. I don't know how you come up with these ideas so quickly, but this is a good one, as always! Very intriguing. You certainly grabbed me. Great imagery of a pink earth on its last gasp. And what could be the calamity that destroyed the earth? Nuclear holocaust is the easy guess, but you could go in many directions with this. Great job.
Bill
Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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A great prose challenge I thought. Glad you liked it. Thanks so much, mikey
Comment from nor84
Word left out here?
I figure you'll be (?) enough to kill me in about a month.
Or maybe two words are missing, as in "p. o'd?"
Cute, Mikey, and a sadly accurate political satire, I fear.
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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Word left out here?
I figure you'll be (?) enough to kill me in about a month.
Or maybe two words are missing, as in "p. o'd?"
Cute, Mikey, and a sadly accurate political satire, I fear.
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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A great prose challenge I thought. Glad you liked it. Thanks so much, mikey
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have missed your writing. I hope you were just busy or on a great vacation and it wasn't anything serious. Once again, I enjoyed reading your post.
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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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I have missed your writing. I hope you were just busy or on a great vacation and it wasn't anything serious. Once again, I enjoyed reading your post.
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Comment Written 24-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2016
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Just a little distracted by the real world. Back to work now I hope.
A great prose challenge I thought. Glad you liked it. Thanks so much, mikey
