Demon Seed With Interest
100 word horror28 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Heh-heh... Yeah, if I had a child that looked like the one depicted in your closing photo, I'd probably do a self-vasectomy and call it done. Lord knows we don't want to go around contaminating mankind's genetic pool by cluttering up our streets and sidewalks with ugly offspring. There's already far too much ugliness in the world without our own frightful, grotesque freaks being added to the mix.
Fitting words from the mouth of that particular babe, "You're fired!", one would think.
Fired up, perhaps...
Good luck.
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Heh-heh... Yeah, if I had a child that looked like the one depicted in your closing photo, I'd probably do a self-vasectomy and call it done. Lord knows we don't want to go around contaminating mankind's genetic pool by cluttering up our streets and sidewalks with ugly offspring. There's already far too much ugliness in the world without our own frightful, grotesque freaks being added to the mix.
Fitting words from the mouth of that particular babe, "You're fired!", one would think.
Fired up, perhaps...
Good luck.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from TAB_that's me
A bit of horror maybe but way more humorous than horror. I didn't see any spag. Good luck Mikey in the contest!
~~teresa~~
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A bit of horror maybe but way more humorous than horror. I didn't see any spag. Good luck Mikey in the contest!
~~teresa~~
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from justafan
The horror this work implies is in the headlines every day... Can not even imagine the horror of him as El presidente!! I am still laughing Mikey :)
Always,
Missy
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The horror this work implies is in the headlines every day... Can not even imagine the horror of him as El presidente!! I am still laughing Mikey :)
Always,
Missy
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from humpwhistle
Oh, Mickey, really? This easiest mark on the planet.
And without the final photo, it's just so much patter.
You may get votes for being cute. But I thought you wanted to be a writer.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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Oh, Mickey, really? This easiest mark on the planet.
And without the final photo, it's just so much patter.
You may get votes for being cute. But I thought you wanted to be a writer.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
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All true. I needed a mindless break from editing.
Besides, you needed a perfect example to go along with your entry! mikey
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Mikey, my entry has nothing to do with you, or any individual.
I find reviewing tedious enough, but when I take the time to review and I get a response like, 'Oh, I just ripped this off in ten minutes' or this was a 'mindless break', I feel betrayed.
Somehow, this is shortcoming of the site nobody mentions.
Peace, Lee
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My apologies. An embarrassed response since your review was on the money. Childish on my part. I always appreciate your honesty. mikey
Comment from Taffspride
Well written Mikey, your story met the contest requirements for 100 words no more no less.
I suppose if one looks at the picture that accompanies the words "You're fired," it is scary. But I really did not find the story scary.
I think one thing I that might need changing is "my precious child" when the person saying knows it is not theirs.
You might say something like, "the child, that precious child,"
Just a few thoughts.
Good luck in the contest.
Iechyd da
Ann
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Well written Mikey, your story met the contest requirements for 100 words no more no less.
I suppose if one looks at the picture that accompanies the words "You're fired," it is scary. But I really did not find the story scary.
I think one thing I that might need changing is "my precious child" when the person saying knows it is not theirs.
You might say something like, "the child, that precious child,"
Just a few thoughts.
Good luck in the contest.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from robina1978
Both pictures complement your story perfectly. Now I know it was not you the one I read before. Here the partner must have been unfaithful with the devil. You don't want to be this ugly child to be yours. So he gets fired. Best wishes for the contest.
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Both pictures complement your story perfectly. Now I know it was not you the one I read before. Here the partner must have been unfaithful with the devil. You don't want to be this ugly child to be yours. So he gets fired. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from Selina Stambi
Ha, Mikey! A most horrific tale indeed!!
The baby has a bad haircut/toupee too, doesn't he?? There are some things money can't seem to buy. :)
Best wishes for the contest. (I've enjoyed grazing on the poetry in your blog.)
Been away for ages. Glad for the chance to catch up.
Sonali
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Ha, Mikey! A most horrific tale indeed!!
The baby has a bad haircut/toupee too, doesn't he?? There are some things money can't seem to buy. :)
Best wishes for the contest. (I've enjoyed grazing on the poetry in your blog.)
Been away for ages. Glad for the chance to catch up.
Sonali
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2015
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Mikey,
Brilliant. this has me laughing all right. that picture at the bottom is also truly disturbing!
Well written piece, and yes, pretty horrific!
All the best in the contest.
G
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Hi Mikey,
Brilliant. this has me laughing all right. that picture at the bottom is also truly disturbing!
Well written piece, and yes, pretty horrific!
All the best in the contest.
G
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2015