Comment from artisart4u

Exceptional

I like this, it is different. I call it having a twist, It is sort of funny. He wasn't going to let his daughter get hurt while playing football.

I am sure a lot of people will like this. Your large font is nice also.

Good luck.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

I use larger font as there are many older members who struggle with the current basic, especially with the grey background.

Thanks so much for the stars. Although this prompt did not require a twist as flash fiction does, I enjoy the misleading process. The stars are greatly appreciated.