Magical Puffins
who'd ha' thought???66 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHAHA. Why am I not surprised this won the prompt? Is there a poetic device you haven't used flawlessly? A more wonderful cadence or sweeter imagery? Hmmm..., you KNOW I'd slap a six on this if I'd caught it sooner! But I'm saving it to savour again (and again, and again, and again...) *Grin*
OUTSTANDING! *********************************!!!
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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HAHAHAHAHA. Why am I not surprised this won the prompt? Is there a poetic device you haven't used flawlessly? A more wonderful cadence or sweeter imagery? Hmmm..., you KNOW I'd slap a six on this if I'd caught it sooner! But I'm saving it to savour again (and again, and again, and again...) *Grin*
OUTSTANDING! *********************************!!!
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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ha ha ha - hi, Dawn - glad you enjoyed my magical puffins! Heaven ONLY knows where they came from, but I'm delighted they've nested in your bookcase!
Big hugs,
Sharyn
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:) Very much my pleasure.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Sharyn, Oh, The Contest Winner!
CONGRATULATIONS!!
This poem really deserves to be honored with such an Award.
It meets all the required norms in an enchanting way and looks like wholesome diet with pleasant flavor and presentation.
Its last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
I think my this last SIXER was only for you.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Hello Sharyn, Oh, The Contest Winner!
CONGRATULATIONS!!
This poem really deserves to be honored with such an Award.
It meets all the required norms in an enchanting way and looks like wholesome diet with pleasant flavor and presentation.
Its last stanza is particularly noteworthy.
I think my this last SIXER was only for you.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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What a sweetheart - and I'm SO glad you saved me a sixer RP. Thank you so much - delighted you enjoyed my magical puffins ... er ... muffins ... :):):)Sharyn
Comment from Zue65
This deserved to be a contest winner. I am really amazed at how creative the poets are, here in this site. I believe I cannot just create something from fixed number of words from the prompt as you did. Congratulations.
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This deserved to be a contest winner. I am really amazed at how creative the poets are, here in this site. I believe I cannot just create something from fixed number of words from the prompt as you did. Congratulations.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks so much nassus - this was, indeed, a very odd prompt! :)Sharyn
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
How cute a poem! It is well written with perfect rhythm and flow, and the story itself is really good. I can just see the little puffins and the wonderful, but incomplete, gift of Mexican muffins. Now who wouldn't like those? Great poem, and cute story in rhyme!
Rhonda
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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How cute a poem! It is well written with perfect rhythm and flow, and the story itself is really good. I can just see the little puffins and the wonderful, but incomplete, gift of Mexican muffins. Now who wouldn't like those? Great poem, and cute story in rhyme!
Rhonda
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thx so much davis! :)Sharyn
Comment from Sis Cat
Congratulations on your well-deserved win for a delightful poem. You make effective use of the key words and use humor and wit to paint a delightful poem story children and adults will love. I also enjoyed the lightness of your poem. Thank you for sharing and congratulations.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Congratulations on your well-deserved win for a delightful poem. You make effective use of the key words and use humor and wit to paint a delightful poem story children and adults will love. I also enjoyed the lightness of your poem. Thank you for sharing and congratulations.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thx so much Sis Cat! :)Sharyn
Comment from c_lucas
Congratulations on your win. Wild animals should not be locked up in cages. They should have the room to roam. You're poem is a great tribute to these animals.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Congratulations on your win. Wild animals should not be locked up in cages. They should have the room to roam. You're poem is a great tribute to these animals.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks Charlie - I agree! :)S
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You're welcome. S. Charlie
Comment from amahra
Congratulations! Great win. I really loved the cute art work. The poem, of course, was cut, well written and musical to listen to once read out loud. Great job. My dear.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Congratulations! Great win. I really loved the cute art work. The poem, of course, was cut, well written and musical to listen to once read out loud. Great job. My dear.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Bless you Amahra - just a bit of fun here! :)Sharyn
Comment from walbc
I can see why you won the contest, Visionary1234. Your poem is delightful to read, it is totally unique and makes the reader smile. What more could a reader ask for? Exceptionally well written. Congratulations on winning.
warm regards, wendy.
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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I can see why you won the contest, Visionary1234. Your poem is delightful to read, it is totally unique and makes the reader smile. What more could a reader ask for? Exceptionally well written. Congratulations on winning.
warm regards, wendy.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks Wendy! :)Sharyn
Comment from Treischel
A delightful little tale about these colorful puffins,their food and the cage they live in and then moved to a large fir palace with lots of room. You incorporated the required words cleverly and smoothly. Well done!
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A delightful little tale about these colorful puffins,their food and the cage they live in and then moved to a large fir palace with lots of room. You incorporated the required words cleverly and smoothly. Well done!
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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I had some fun with this one Treischel - thank you, my dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from danpald
Charming weave of the poem
Imagination open to flow
With each line a new spin does come
That makes it such a charming run
Still the need to understand
How the puffins are after this plan
Did they return full of fish
Or was the Mexican muffins the only dish
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Charming weave of the poem
Imagination open to flow
With each line a new spin does come
That makes it such a charming run
Still the need to understand
How the puffins are after this plan
Did they return full of fish
Or was the Mexican muffins the only dish
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Oh you're too funny - thank you Dan! Who needs more than flexible mixable Mexican muffins, hmm?
:)Sharyn