Act of Endurance
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Comment from meggie13
In life we face situations which are both good and bad. When we compare ourselves with others we will find that most of the time we should be thanful for the state we are in. Paul, one of the apostles said we should be content in any situation we are .That is the way I see life.
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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In life we face situations which are both good and bad. When we compare ourselves with others we will find that most of the time we should be thanful for the state we are in. Paul, one of the apostles said we should be content in any situation we are .That is the way I see life.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
Lovely and beautiful response, a true child
of God. Also That is the way I see life.
Thanking you for your generous rate and
comments. Very pleasing.
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You are very welcome. Thanks for liking my response. Yes. I am a child
of God.
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have a good day
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You too, TPAC, Blessings, meg:))
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Interesting philosophy. Both are dead or dying. Good job on expressing your feelings. I do agree we need to be happy where we are until we can improve in a good way.
Thanks for sharing.
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Interesting philosophy. Both are dead or dying. Good job on expressing your feelings. I do agree we need to be happy where we are until we can improve in a good way.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Thank you for your response and generous rate. This is Holy Text statement with the creation: until we can improve in a good way. Holy Text resolution: a violent second coming. I see all the children of God, angel and us, as the bee or fly. Sad most see death.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Isn't that the flipping truth? Short, sweet, and right to a crystal clear message. Descriptive language says all there is to say. Write on.
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Isn't that the flipping truth? Short, sweet, and right to a crystal clear message. Descriptive language says all there is to say. Write on.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
So you believe this has some flare and a raw etch of truth. Glad you found delight: and I do appreciate your enthusiasm about the statement definition. Also, thank you for your reply, comments, ranks, insight and review. Right on.
Comment from Sis Cat
Yes, it is better to be a bee trapped in honey than a fly in a web. Both are doomed, but one death is sweeter than the other. I like the proverb feel of this poem weighing two bad outcomes.
"ed" is needed at the end of "threaten."
Otherwise, I enjoyed this poem's message of being happy where we are. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Yes, it is better to be a bee trapped in honey than a fly in a web. Both are doomed, but one death is sweeter than the other. I like the proverb feel of this poem weighing two bad outcomes.
"ed" is needed at the end of "threaten."
Otherwise, I enjoyed this poem's message of being happy where we are. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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Excellent response and very insightful in reply: one death is sweeter. I did not see death for neither, the bee can eat. Your statements bring forth the glass half filled and half empty conception. The bee could be slow in sink where the fly might be wrapped to eat. Or fly slightly trapped by web able to move and bee having one leg stuck. Thank you for the head up about poem faults, generous rate and review.
Comment from RodG
You have an interesting way of looking at life, but to be honest, I am not sure why the bee is better off than the fly. Both are stuck/trapped.
"Then" should be "Than" and "threaten" should be "threatened."
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You have an interesting way of looking at life, but to be honest, I am not sure why the bee is better off than the fly. Both are stuck/trapped.
"Then" should be "Than" and "threaten" should be "threatened."
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
One thing I do want to fulfill is honesty. I agree I have an interesting way of looking at life. The assurance you seek is time: each stuck/trapped victim holding probabilities. The fly is at the end of its candle; but the bee has a chance, moments to consider for aid. Great rate and wonderful review. Thanking you for a leg up with poem faults.
Comment from Praise000
TPAC,
Thought provoking poem.
Carefully chosen words.
The image that you have used is an icing on the cake.
Best wishes. From Praise000
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reply by the author on 03-May-2015
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TPAC,
Thought provoking poem.
Carefully chosen words.
The image that you have used is an icing on the cake.
Best wishes. From Praise000
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 03-May-2015
A kind thank you for your reply, review, rate and best wishes. For a moment it does make on think. Believe it or not, out of sixty poems written: this one is my shortest, four lines. I hope you are right about having a cake. I see you understand the issue presented to each concept. Plus an icing. Also the value of one concept over the other. Best wishes to you, too.