Letting go
Tanka contest entry34 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
J J J what wonderful words of wisdom that you have sent my way. lol I take them for my own. Much needed at this time period. truth just rings through this poem, has a great impact on the reader, me.
thxs for that
lulube
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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J J J what wonderful words of wisdom that you have sent my way. lol I take them for my own. Much needed at this time period. truth just rings through this poem, has a great impact on the reader, me.
thxs for that
lulube
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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Hi Lulube,
glad my words could be of use... it's why I write these types of poems every now and again... I would never pen words like these that I hadn't first used personly or believed in... so thank you so much for the reinforcement... I truly appreciate your review, comments, sentiment and STARS... it feels good to know my thoughts touch a knowing... my reward is in the compliment you bestow upon me... again, thank you!
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's.
Comment from SueZen
"What we resist persists". Indeed, our mind "saves" what we feed it with, like a "computer" and can truly become a prison, full of poisonous content, Not easy to "delete" what fed with during a large part of our life, but so worthwhile to get rid of all that enslaves more than serves us. Spring-cleaning creates space for silence and inner-Peace. Poem expresses so WELL in so FEW words what we must learn and really dedicate ourselves to. Wish you good luck in letting go and in competition. Pic super to complement poem !
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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"What we resist persists". Indeed, our mind "saves" what we feed it with, like a "computer" and can truly become a prison, full of poisonous content, Not easy to "delete" what fed with during a large part of our life, but so worthwhile to get rid of all that enslaves more than serves us. Spring-cleaning creates space for silence and inner-Peace. Poem expresses so WELL in so FEW words what we must learn and really dedicate ourselves to. Wish you good luck in letting go and in competition. Pic super to complement poem !
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 05-May-2015
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Hi Susan,
again and as usual, your wise assessment of the poem's meaning hits the mark... this is a process of elimination... or at very least an acceptance to allow a freedom to grow in life and in spirituality.
thank you so much for your beautiful review, observations, comments... and as always, sentiment... you are, and always will be greatly appreciated my dear friend.
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's
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And vice-versa James ! You are a bright shining star on a far horizon, physically, but ever close spiritually, a dear, treasured friend, soul mate with whom I can share my most intimate feelings, so those of a less positive nature too, whether in a poem or otherwise. Take care ! With love, joy, compassion and gratitude, Susan xxx
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an beautiful poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is so very true from the author in this post. The only thing that holds us back is ourselves. We need to believe that we can achieve before we have a chance of doing so.
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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This is an beautiful poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is so very true from the author in this post. The only thing that holds us back is ourselves. We need to believe that we can achieve before we have a chance of doing so.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Hi Tomes,
firstly, let me apologize for the delayed response to this very fine review... my week has been a tad dis-jointed.
So, thank you for this review and your wonderful comments... most appreciated friend.
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James .
Comment from Glasstruth
Wow! So spiritual, and even if one isn't it still speaks volumes. With so few words you've given a lesson of inner peace that's worth every word you've written. Beaufully written. Thanks for sharing. Les
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Wow! So spiritual, and even if one isn't it still speaks volumes. With so few words you've given a lesson of inner peace that's worth every word you've written. Beaufully written. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Hi Les,
so, I must apologize for this delayed response to this wonderful review my friend... this week has been a wash-out, and it still continues to be... but I will allow the current to take me where it may... smile))))))).
Thank you, I truly appreciate this review, rating and your very kind words.
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James.
Comment from Pantygynt
A splendid tanka with which to start Sunday. "The silence of inner peace" is a beautiful line with a strong Japanese flavour to it that is most authentic. The thought that it might come unconditionally is most encouraging.
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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A splendid tanka with which to start Sunday. "The silence of inner peace" is a beautiful line with a strong Japanese flavour to it that is most authentic. The thought that it might come unconditionally is most encouraging.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Hi Pantygynt,
firstly, let me apologize for this delayed response to your truly wonderful review... a week full of bumps and hopes sees me lagging.
Thank you so much for this review, rating and beautifully kind comments... all of which are most greatly appreciated!
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's.
Comment from lalajovanoski
This a wonderful tanka poem contest entry. Well composed and and the message is deep. Also - the message is easily received by the reader. Well worth the six star rating
Thank you very much for sharing. I truly enjoyed reading it. Bravo.
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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This a wonderful tanka poem contest entry. Well composed and and the message is deep. Also - the message is easily received by the reader. Well worth the six star rating
Thank you very much for sharing. I truly enjoyed reading it. Bravo.
Comment Written 03-May-2015
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Hi Lala J,
thanks for the wonderful review, comments and stars... all of which I appreciate very much... be well.
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's
Comment from Dawn Munro
I have to ask - was this poem the result of meditation? (Sorry - could not resist - I KNOW it wasn't - it's just YOU.) But James, this is enlightenment, yet again. I wonder how many of us struggle with exactly what you spell out within this marvelous tanka? EXCEPTIONAL. Best of luck, oh wise knight.
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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I have to ask - was this poem the result of meditation? (Sorry - could not resist - I KNOW it wasn't - it's just YOU.) But James, this is enlightenment, yet again. I wonder how many of us struggle with exactly what you spell out within this marvelous tanka? EXCEPTIONAL. Best of luck, oh wise knight.
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Hi Dawn,
finally! Yeah, I've been on a go slow sorta week... no, not intentionally... had treatments and recovery time... still waiting for the recovery part... and you know what? This poem in some way was conceived in meditation... maybe not all the words, but the intent definitely... you know I'm that 'try before you buy' sorta guy... so I definitely must believe in its authenticity before I put my name to it... this is one particular issue I work hard to achieve, and besides, resistance is futile... well at least in this instance... and to your question... 96% of everyone... I'm just leaving the 4% open to debate... you know yogi's, sages and such... hey, and not let us forget the deranged, that don't even knowledge resistance...oh wow, that could cover way too many options... maybe I should drop that percentage down even further? Yeah, I'm playin' with you, wouldn't have a clue, but what's new? Smile)))))))))))))))))))))).
So anyway, sorry for the late response to such a lovely review... my very talented friend... you know you are always truly appreciated... stars, no stars, doesn't matter... it's the lovely sentiment that counts.
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's.
Comment from Sis Cat
Excellent Tanka form. I was just studying the form, so I was pleased to see your example. The self-love that leads to inner peace is what one strives for. Thank you for sharing your eloquent words.
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Excellent Tanka form. I was just studying the form, so I was pleased to see your example. The self-love that leads to inner peace is what one strives for. Thank you for sharing your eloquent words.
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Hi Sis Cat,
firstly, an apology for the delayed response to your wonderful review... my week has been full of bumps and hopes and has seen me lag behind... nothing new you say? Possible, but how do you know me so well...smile)))))))))))))))))).
So, a big thank you for your lovely review, rating and truly beautifully-kind comments... all of which are most greatly appreciated friend.
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's.
Comment from meggie13
The presentation is beautiful. Very important to love yourself before you love someone or anything else. You have to be proud of who you are. Then and only then you can become the person you were meant to be.
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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The presentation is beautiful. Very important to love yourself before you love someone or anything else. You have to be proud of who you are. Then and only then you can become the person you were meant to be.
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 07-May-2015
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Hi Meg,
firstly, let me apologize for my delayed response to your wonderfully insightful review... and secondly, let me thank you so much for your the rating and lovely comments... you have it spot-on right... everything must start from solid-authentic foundations. then truth can be forthcoming in all of its splendour.... truly appreciated!
With our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's.
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James , no need to apologize. I know how busy authors are. I am glad you liked my review. meg:))
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James , no need to apologize. I know how busy authors are. I am glad you liked my review. meg:))
Comment from Jackarrie
Well penned James, All we need are quiet moments
to release our dreams let solitude be our guide. a deserved six
Well done,
good luck in the conterst. Mary
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Well penned James, All we need are quiet moments
to release our dreams let solitude be our guide. a deserved six
Well done,
good luck in the conterst. Mary
Comment Written 02-May-2015
reply by the author on 06-May-2015
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Hi Mary,
truly sorry for the delayed response to this wonderful review... the past couple of weeks haven't been my friend... pain wise, and well, I had to travel for some treatment early this week, and to tell you the truth, haven't really recovered all that well... but still hoping.
so, my dear friend, thank you, this review, your comments and of course the extra bling are truly appreciated.
with our thoughts we create,
freedom of mindset,
James vx's.