Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "No Such Thing As Angels"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
126 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem/song for the woman of an alcoholic who waits for her man to come home drunk as a skunk she just keeps loving him no matter what.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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A very well-written heartfelt poem/song for the woman of an alcoholic who waits for her man to come home drunk as a skunk she just keeps loving him no matter what.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Appreciate your review.
Comment from Sankey
This was a great read. I rode along with you. As I said let me know if you have not done a tune for this. Looks like SIXES are out over here till tomorrow.Loved the layout as well.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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This was a great read. I rode along with you. As I said let me know if you have not done a tune for this. Looks like SIXES are out over here till tomorrow.Loved the layout as well.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Appreciate the comments.
Comment from Tootsie55
Hey look! Another SIX! Thanks for digging this out again, I don't think I saw it last time. Did you do music to this? I could have a go at it if you want. Just one question....but, how long ...they reckon a comma is not allowed after but...but I guess lyric license might allow hehe.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Hey look! Another SIX! Thanks for digging this out again, I don't think I saw it last time. Did you do music to this? I could have a go at it if you want. Just one question....but, how long ...they reckon a comma is not allowed after but...but I guess lyric license might allow hehe.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2019
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
Comment from DR DIP
Brett I know we have had a rocky relationship on this site anbd we have such diverse personalities and egos but I have to admit, this is a wonderful write and could easily be song lyrics to a country and western tune send it to Garth Brooks or something.
respectfully dip
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Brett I know we have had a rocky relationship on this site anbd we have such diverse personalities and egos but I have to admit, this is a wonderful write and could easily be song lyrics to a country and western tune send it to Garth Brooks or something.
respectfully dip
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks. As I said in the PM, I do appreciate your support.
Comment from country ranch writer
Sad but beautiful, if he cared he would climb out of the bottle and stay sober. She is trying to tell him he has a life to live and needs to move on.she will always be in his heart, she wouldn't want him drinking so much.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Sad but beautiful, if he cared he would climb out of the bottle and stay sober. She is trying to tell him he has a life to live and needs to move on.she will always be in his heart, she wouldn't want him drinking so much.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Appreciate the review.
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Comment from Teri7
Brett, I can see these lyrics being one of the best selling country songs. You used great and seemingly heart felt words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Brett, I can see these lyrics being one of the best selling country songs. You used great and seemingly heart felt words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Janetsue
These are very good song lyrics. In reading through them, however, the reader stumbles and has to re-read a line when the right punctuation is missing. For example:
I don't know why I go there(;) it ain't the place I want to be.
There may be no such thing as angels(,) but I got one here with me.
I run right to the bottle(--)the only place I'm ever free.
She is more than just my lover(,) she is still my best friend.
No matter what life does to me(,) I can make it to the end.
I especially like this line:
She's the rock that I still lean on. The gold inside our wedding rings.
Still, it isn't presented correctly:
She's the rock that I still lean on--the gold inside our wedding rings.
(The gold inside our wedding rings isn't a complete sentence.)
These punctuation issues are all easy to correct. I truly I think you have written some excellent lyrics.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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These are very good song lyrics. In reading through them, however, the reader stumbles and has to re-read a line when the right punctuation is missing. For example:
I don't know why I go there(;) it ain't the place I want to be.
There may be no such thing as angels(,) but I got one here with me.
I run right to the bottle(--)the only place I'm ever free.
She is more than just my lover(,) she is still my best friend.
No matter what life does to me(,) I can make it to the end.
I especially like this line:
She's the rock that I still lean on. The gold inside our wedding rings.
Still, it isn't presented correctly:
She's the rock that I still lean on--the gold inside our wedding rings.
(The gold inside our wedding rings isn't a complete sentence.)
These punctuation issues are all easy to correct. I truly I think you have written some excellent lyrics.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thanks for being the 100th review I have received for these lyrics.
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I am so happy to know that! :-)
Comment from the13thpoet
Happy TGIF to you Brett. I really enjoyed your song lyrics, anyone who can put up with alcoholism is truly an angel. Your words were heartfelt, sad, and touching all at the same time. Good job!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Happy TGIF to you Brett. I really enjoyed your song lyrics, anyone who can put up with alcoholism is truly an angel. Your words were heartfelt, sad, and touching all at the same time. Good job!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
Comment from Ulla
Wonderful, and how important it is to find and to have the one person who really stands by you, when you know deep down that you may not deserve it, and is possibly abusing that faith all the time. Very well written. I enjoyed it. Ulla
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Wonderful, and how important it is to find and to have the one person who really stands by you, when you know deep down that you may not deserve it, and is possibly abusing that faith all the time. Very well written. I enjoyed it. Ulla
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Congratulations.
_excellent tone and rhythm
-good flow
-kept my interest all the way through
my favority part:
She was over in the corner when I came home tonight.
Once again Jack Daniels helped me see the light.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Congratulations.
_excellent tone and rhythm
-good flow
-kept my interest all the way through
my favority part:
She was over in the corner when I came home tonight.
Once again Jack Daniels helped me see the light.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2015
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Thank you.
