The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "We talk about love"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Carolyn. You are starting to turn me into a fan of these little tiny pieces, when you can say in three short lines when it would take me 10 stanzas LOL. Great job and well said mate, cheers Fez
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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G'day Carolyn. You are starting to turn me into a fan of these little tiny pieces, when you can say in three short lines when it would take me 10 stanzas LOL. Great job and well said mate, cheers Fez
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Hi Fez,
Brevity has not always been a strong point with me, however, short poems do help discipline me a little. LOL I am so happy you enjoyed this one.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from GracieAnn
Carolyn, this 5 7 5 is packed with spiritual meaning and inspiration that hearkens to the first commandment. Well done in a concise way. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Carolyn, this 5 7 5 is packed with spiritual meaning and inspiration that hearkens to the first commandment. Well done in a concise way. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Thanks GracieAnn,
I appreciate this fine review. BTW, how is your family?
Love, Carolyn
Comment from krys123
Carolyn; this is a really great message that you show your love Is more important than just speaking it. Your passages short and sweet and very effective in sending out a message which can be remembered because the rich short format. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always Carolyn.
Alex
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Carolyn; this is a really great message that you show your love Is more important than just speaking it. Your passages short and sweet and very effective in sending out a message which can be remembered because the rich short format. Thank you for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always Carolyn.
Alex
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Thank you dear Alex, and may He be with you as well.. :-) Carolyn
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You are so welcome Carolyn
Comment from royowen
You're absolutely correct when you say these things Carolyn, we don't say these these things if we're in facts not practising them, because they don't mean a thing, as in the gospel, we walk in the love of God! Well done, beautifully said, or written, rather, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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You're absolutely correct when you say these things Carolyn, we don't say these these things if we're in facts not practising them, because they don't mean a thing, as in the gospel, we walk in the love of God! Well done, beautifully said, or written, rather, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Thank Roy for your kind and discerning remarks. :-) Carolyn
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My pleasure
Comment from kiwisteveh
Your message seems to be about Christian faith, but it is equally applicable to romantic love, parental love and other relationships.
How else can we know the genuine nature of others' feelings than by the 'evidence'?
Steve
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Your message seems to be about Christian faith, but it is equally applicable to romantic love, parental love and other relationships.
How else can we know the genuine nature of others' feelings than by the 'evidence'?
Steve
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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I like the parallels you draw here, sound conclusions. The poem could relate to many kinds of love and relationships.
Thank you for your comments.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from Neonewman
Very well crafted young lady! Direct, informative and straight to the point. We talk about love and what we think we want love to be or how it should be. Just let it be what it is, LOVE and immerse yourself in the moment.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Very well crafted young lady! Direct, informative and straight to the point. We talk about love and what we think we want love to be or how it should be. Just let it be what it is, LOVE and immerse yourself in the moment.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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LOVE... immerse yourself in the moment. I enjoy that.. Thanks Steve for the fine comments.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from scd41
In your short poem, you have hit the nail on the head. Instead of merely talking about love, we should demonstrate it. The popular saying is 'Practice what you preach'. Love is preached in all major religions but still it is mostly not visible.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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In your short poem, you have hit the nail on the head. Instead of merely talking about love, we should demonstrate it. The popular saying is 'Practice what you preach'. Love is preached in all major religions but still it is mostly not visible.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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And love ought to shine... I so appreciate your fine comments scd41... Thank you for the r/r.. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Carolyn,
Hey, I like the finish in your notes!! Cool (*:*)
It's so true, too. More love in the world and less war. Wonderful concept.
Great choice of words.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Hi, Carolyn,
Hey, I like the finish in your notes!! Cool (*:*)
It's so true, too. More love in the world and less war. Wonderful concept.
Great choice of words.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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Thanks dear Jax,
I appreciate that you liked the words in this short poem.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from mbagby23
Short, yet strong meaning. Actions speak louder then words. If you tell someone we love them and never show it how will they know.
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Short, yet strong meaning. Actions speak louder then words. If you tell someone we love them and never show it how will they know.
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2015
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You are so right, thanks for your fine comments. :-) Carolyn