Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

Hahahahahaha! Caroline you are funny my friend. Great little piece and I hope that the next chapter is as good as you hope it will be. Great fun write, cheers Fez

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015

Thanks Fez.... I enjoyed your review... :-) Carolyn

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Dear, Carolyn!

OMGoodness!! And I'm out of 'sixers!' Crap!

If I weren't already sitting down, I'd have fallen!! I can't even tell you in words how much this dedication to me and the 'The Allister Series' means. I'm just gobsmacked!

Thank you -- Thank you -- Thank You

I love these guys, so I'm very touched when others feel a connection to them.

Oh, I wish I could copy/paste this. I love the poem, the formatting, the whole thing is AWESOME. What a lovely thing to do, my friend.

I can tell you, Jiggs will be back in town in Chapter 6, and mercy, he will stir up some trouble. Yes he will indeed---but-----Zip-a-lock----(*>*)

Perfection---that's what this is to me.....

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)


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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2015

Dear Jax,
I am delighted you enjoyed this little poem. I thought it would make a good Happy New Year gift.... Since I was getting such a kick out of 'Zip a Lock', I figured it would be good to share with others and promote your fine series as well.
Just don't you let old Jiggs hurt my Candy or I'm comin' to get you pardner....
It has been so gratifying to see how many others are enjoying your books.
Love, Carolyn

reply by Jacqueline M Franklin on 04-Jan-2015

Ahhh, my dear friend, you blew me away. I read and re-read it. It was indeed the best New Years present.

I figured out how to have a copy for my scrapbook. I memorized a stanza, typed it, repeated, etc. I was able to copy/paste the artwork. It's cool.

Okay, so, now you might not like exactly how things will go. But, wait-----calm down. Deep breaths. You know the family always sticks together.

I can also tell you that when Lone Walker deals with Jiggs and his ultimate demise----your blood pressure will stabilize. A deed well done----Lone Walker style!

Then----you guessed it------
Zip-a-Lock! (*<*)

Comment from krazee3377

Excellent

I truly enjoyed the lesson being taught in this poem. It's a hard eye opening lesson when you realize nothing is certain, we can't know from one second to the next where our lives might turn. You have to take it all, both the good with the bad. Some secrets are just meant to be kept no matter how hard it might be.. thank you for sharing this piece heidi

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 Comment Written 03-Jan-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2015

Hi there and thanks for your comments. Yes, when you are reading a good book, sometimes you just have to wait and see what happens next.
:-) Carolyn