Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

your words in your acrostic December work well to allow the reader to see and feel what December means to you

good imagery

good use "E" assonance

good use "S" "L" consonance

flows easy read

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014

Thanks once again SC for the great comments and encouragement. I appreciate you. :-) Carolyn

reply by Smoothiecool on 04-Dec-2014

most welcome...SC <:> Faye

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Nice acrostic dear Carolyn, you have nailed this one. One of the requirements of the good acrostic is to fill it with something akin to inspired revelation, and you have certainly done that here! Well done, the message for the season is clear and exactly with point by point presentation, well scribed. Blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014

Thanks Roy, I always feel so good after reading your fine reviews. I appreciate all the encouragement and am glad you liked December. :-) Carolyn

reply by royowen on 03-Dec-2014

Most welcome, Carolyn

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

What a beautiful acrostic that describes December perfectly! I love the nativity scenes the best, although Christmas trees come close! I love all the lights and the goodwill...wished it lasted all year! This is great!

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014

Thanks Irish Rain,
So glad you liked this one. I wish it would last all year as well.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

hey Carolyn, this is a beautiful acrostic for the activities that take place in December for the Christmas season. I enjoyed reading it. it made me feel warm and cozy

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014

Hi there,
so glad the poem made you feel warm and cozy. We need that feeling in December. Thanks for your great comments and stars.
:-) Carolyn

Comment from linsbm

Excellent

This a well written acrostic poem. You were able to describe what December month is all about. Pretty nice words used that makes one feel the occasion and the excitement is there to expect. In spite of this form, you deliver a consistent flow of thoughts that share the readers a total picture of the December. I enjoyed the read.Thanks for sharing.} Lin

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 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014

Hi Lin,
I really appreciate your comments and that you relate and liked the poem. Thanks also for all those stars. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Carolyn,

Great acrostic defining the holiday month of rejoicing and family. Love the artwork. Just need my cup of hot chocolate, with marshmallows for sure, and kick back in front of the fire. Yep, I'm so, there! (*,*)

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*,*)


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 Comment Written 02-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014

We have already done that a few times already. There is nothing that goes with a fireplace and family, like a good cup of hot chocolate to warm the night.
Thanks so much Jax, glad you enjoyed December, I also appreciate all those stars.
:-) Carolyn