Comment from CHIGYSISKI

Excellent

Lovely imagery.Excellent entry for the prompt. Appears to meet the contest requirements. I liked the last line best:
God's perfect system

So much in nature points to God's immense ability to produce perfection!

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Thank you for your insightful comments. What would we do without our GPS? :-) Carolyn

Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT

Excellent

You created a very clear vision in so very few words. The added photo fit perfectly with your words. Here in Hawaii we do not have a change in seasons and that is something I do miss at times. Nice work
TK

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Hi there and where have you been. I have prayed you and Ginger are ok as I had heard nothing else.
Thank you so much for the comments and rating. Yes Missouri has distinctive seasons, however, a sunset over the ocean would be nice now and then. :-) Please take care, :-) Carolyn

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your syllable count spot on

your few words portray the formation of the geese as they fly south with their given navigation system
yes their flights are amazing

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Hi there SC, and thank you for this wonderful review and encouragement. :-) Carolyn

reply by Smoothiecool on 09-Nov-2014

most welcome..SC >.Faye

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Carolyn,

Love your 5.7.5 paired with the neat artwork. You formatted it to complement nicely. Great entry.

We have an abundance of quail around our house. Drives our Pepperoni crazy. It is so cool to see Mom, Dad, and the tiny, tiny little kids running around the yard. Toooo cute.

Good luck in the contest.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Hi Jax, thank you for the great review.
I could watch nature for hours. (If I didn't have to do the dishes now and then.:-)) Quails are sweet little creatures.
Have a great weekend my friend. :-) Carolyn

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this 5 7 5 poem about nature's beautiful and wonderful system, God's creations are perfect.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest

 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Hi there and thanks for the great review and encouragement. I always appreciate your comments. :-) Carolyn

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Carolyn;
brilliant concept, masterfully inventive and ingeniously creative ideals, and a very flowing ceiling to this 5/7/5 syllabic format.
A very enjoyable read that expresses and describes the picture you have chosen that represents your poem very well.
Thanks for sharing and posting and good luck in the contest for this is an excellent entry.
Alex

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 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Thanks Alex,
To be honest with you, I never thought winning was all that important, but I would love to win just one that is site sponsored. LOL
You are such a sweet encouragement to me. I am glad you enjoyed it and found it contest worthy.
Have you heard from our friend Ritchie? I miss him, if so tell him hello please.
Love, Carolyn

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A great entry in this contest Carolyn, I haven't seen you for a while, like the beauty of the trees in winter, you've been hibernating, good to see you back with a great 5/7/5 entry, glorifying and connecting God, as He ushers the gees to fly south, great entry, Carolyn, blessings, Roy.

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 Comment Written 07-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2014

Thanks Roy,
I am so very glad you liked this one. Migratory birds, as well as butterflies are so amazing to me. They know just when to leave, and exactly where to go. God is so awesome. Wouldn't it be wonderful if man would follow Him with such faith.
Love to you all... and yes, I am very busy, not getting to write quite as much. I am just getting to do a few reviews this evening. You are coming up next. :-) Take care my friend, Carolyn