Comment from daeneam

Excellent

I'm glad my children are beginning to love reading and my two girls love to spend their free time at the school library. I told them that everything they read fills their head with new bits of information. The more knowledge you have, the better-equipped you are to tackle any challenge you'll ever face. c", Mae

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jul-2014

Mae, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

A child-like imaginative look at
the book drop. Vivid images throughout
strong meter and great rhyme.
I have no doubt Sawyer will be "plopping" many books
into that book drop before long. Nancy

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

nancy, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Great presentation for a very clever poem. Quatrains are great for this sort of story-telling. "Young Sawyer, hate to tell you - more than books are dropped into Library chutes!

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Kay, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Beautiful, Brooke. It gave me the giggles, which means it is good. Loved reading it. As always a nice picture of Sawyer to go with it. Nicely done. Miss Sally

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Miss Sally, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Bobby Jo

Excellent

This is a different approach than I have ever thought about writing. What a fun way to describe books. This was fun and such a childish imagination.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Bobby Jo, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Exceptional

I bet they all worry
'bout what I will plop
to add to the mix of
the library drop.

You never cease to amaze me with your vivid imagination - always such a treat to read your poems. I hope you're putting them in a book for Sawyer - quite a job!!

Margaret

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Thank you so very much, Margaret, for your generous rating and thoughtful comments :-) It is always great to see you. I'd ask you how your Fourth of July weekend was, but that is probably not the right question to ask a Brit. LOL :-) Brooke

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

Good use of the abcb rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good alliteration with made/my...mysterious/mansions...munches/mountains. Good rhythm and flow. Good complimentary photo followed by a clear message.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Righteous Riter, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

Dear Brooke,
How imaginitive! Using the metaphor of a drop box as a tummy swallowing up all the stuff in books. Another really great poem today. Got to save some sixes for the other folks:) Great job--Ted

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Ted, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

What an imaginative idea, that the library drop contains all the ideas and characters in the stories of the returned books! That would be a lot to swallow, for sure. The Library drop should be a little lower for little tykes. LOL! Really fun to read, Brooke!

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

Adrienne, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from elchupakabra

Excellent

This was a great light-hearted piece. I really like the imagery of all the stories coming to life in the bookdrop, a little bit like Night at the Museum minus the over-acting of Ben Stiller. Great work on this piece as well, Brooke, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Jul-2014

elchupakabra, thank you so much :-) Brooke