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The Heart of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Butterflies and Bluebirds"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

35 total reviews 
Comment from Cajungirl
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Carolyn, this is such a beautiful tribute to a dear FanStory family member. I was sadden when I heard the news. Bless you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
    Thank you so much,
    Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Carolyn,

This is a very nice poem for Gungalo. I just knew her slightly and didn't know her name was Pam until people started writing poetry about her passing and used her real name. I always enjoyed reading her poetry and liked getting her reviews.

Kat

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
    Thank you Kat, she was a unique poet. I learned a lot from her use of forms and the encouraging reviews she wrote. She teased me. She knew I wouldn't comment if she wrote a really 'raw' one. When she would break away from the sensual and write of nature that was always a thrill in reading. I loved her.
    Love you too,
    Carolyn
reply by MizKat on 28-Jun-2014
    Hi Carolyn,

    It is so nice to meet people on here and become friends. You are my sister in Christ and Ritchie is my brother in Christ. Who could ask for more?

    Love you, Kat
Comment from Pili Pubul
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Wish I had six stars,very beautiful and moving
tribute to our friend Gungalo, love your message and poetic images.
She will never be forgotten. Hugs. Pili

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
    Thank you and hugs to you too Phil,
    Carolyn
reply by Pili Pubul on 28-Jun-2014
    You welcome. PILI
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2014
    Sorry for the typo PILI. Take care, :-) Carolyn
reply by Pili Pubul on 29-Jun-2014
    Don't worry happens often LOL. Carolyn is my daughter's name too ;:--). Pili
reply by Pili Pubul on 29-Jun-2014
    Hope you had a good night , have a great day. Love you... Pili
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is a lovely expression of peace and hope. It is a truly beautiful tribute to an inspiring lady who touched many of us in her own special way. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
    Thank you so much,
    Carolyn
Comment from beautyseeker
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So beautiful, wish i had a sixer! Lovely truth of soaring to our Lord by "grace enlightened love"... Love the internal rhymed line " travel on in sweetest calm"... Well done

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
    Thank you beautyseeker,
Comment from Dean Kuch
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So beautifully written is this touching and heartfelt tribute to Pam, Carolyn. Your elegant and carefully chosen words clearly depict, in resplendent beauty, the ways in which our souls ascend. Pam is now in the hands of her Creator, and the Creator of all things. I've no doubt she's received a huge hug from Him, and a gentle, Job well done, my sweet child upon her arrival.

Lovely poem, and a lovely ode to our own Gungalo. She will be sorely missed.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
    Thank you Dean, your words mean so much,
    Carolyn
reply by Dean Kuch on 28-Jun-2014
    You are very welcome, Carolyn.
Comment from zanya
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Yes a fond farewell to a weaver of words who brought joy and reflection in her writings and explorations of Life on this planet -'Receive your healing balm'

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
    I like your 'weaver of words', they certainly fit Pam.
    Thank you so much
Comment from poetbear
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The image is beautiful.
You did a great write here for our Dear friend.
Her friendship and talent will always be with us.
I am grateful that she was my freind and the light her work shone her at FB.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 28-Jun-2014
    Thank you PB
Comment from Eric1
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This a lovely kind tribute to a wonderful Lady, the poem itself has a lovely flowing almost melodic virtue, the rhyming is also excellent, your dear friend Pam would have been proud of you.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
    Thank you Eric1 for this wonderful review. I appreciate all that you have said. :-) Carolyn
Comment from LadyFair
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I did not know that Pam passed away.
Thank you Carolyn for writing these verses
in remembrance of her. She was a gifted poetess
and a dear person.
Enjoyed this beautiful picture and verse.
Perfect with no need for changes.
LadyFair/Bev

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2014

reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
    Thank you Bev, I just learned of her death today. She was talented and so versatile. I enjoyed her very much. As you say, a dear person.
    Carolyn
reply by LadyFair on 27-Jun-2014
    Do you know when Pam passed away?
    Thank you for the reply.
    Bev
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2014
    A friend of hers sent a PM, June 16, died in the States with her family, lung cancer. She was cremated and will be returned to St Thomas in the future for dispersion of her ashes. Yes she was a dear
reply by LadyFair on 27-Jun-2014
    Thank you for this information.
    LadyFair