Along the Jericho Road
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38 total reviews
Comment from boxergirl
Great job with the continuation of your story line. Interesting phenomenon that occurred after Jana and Father Brian were run off the road. Matthew and Aaron are going to check it out. 8-)
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Great job with the continuation of your story line. Interesting phenomenon that occurred after Jana and Father Brian were run off the road. Matthew and Aaron are going to check it out. 8-)
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, BG. Good to hear from you! :) Bev
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi, Bev.
Wow! What a chapter. The excitement builds with each scene to an amazing finish. Your descriptions and conversation between Jana and Father Brian is excellent. She let's her feelings be expressed, her pain and underlying fear. The second part of the chapter is great! The dialogue and imagery is excellent. Bravo to you! This is fabulous writing!
Bye my friend
Hugs
Rosalyne :)
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Hi, Bev.
Wow! What a chapter. The excitement builds with each scene to an amazing finish. Your descriptions and conversation between Jana and Father Brian is excellent. She let's her feelings be expressed, her pain and underlying fear. The second part of the chapter is great! The dialogue and imagery is excellent. Bravo to you! This is fabulous writing!
Bye my friend
Hugs
Rosalyne :)
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Aw, thanks so much, Rosalyne. The action should be pretty consistent from here to the end. Thank you so much, not only for your generosity and encouragement, but for your kind words. I always feel great after reading your reviews.
Comment from judiverse
Jana takes kind of a hard line with Father Brian in this, not giving the Catholic church any allowance for sexual abuses committed by priests. Jana is looking for earthly justice. Excellent dialogue. Tense, exciting moments when Jana's car is struck by a mysterious truck with no license plate and plunges into the river. Supernatural forces seem to be controlling what's happening here. Matthew goes down to see what has become of the passengers, but the sword appearing in the sky makes it a scary proposition. Excellent work, and six stars. I always look forward to your chapters. judi
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Jana takes kind of a hard line with Father Brian in this, not giving the Catholic church any allowance for sexual abuses committed by priests. Jana is looking for earthly justice. Excellent dialogue. Tense, exciting moments when Jana's car is struck by a mysterious truck with no license plate and plunges into the river. Supernatural forces seem to be controlling what's happening here. Matthew goes down to see what has become of the passengers, but the sword appearing in the sky makes it a scary proposition. Excellent work, and six stars. I always look forward to your chapters. judi
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Judi. I'm always thrilled when I get a review from you, especially such a generous one. Thank you for your faithful following of this novel and for your encouragement. Means a lot to me!
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You're so welcome. I've got to admit this isn't the kind of fiction I usually read, but this has me hooked! judi
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Wow, that makes me feel great, Judi. You're awesome! xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You are doing a fantastic job with this novel. With each post I read it gets better and better. You are writing pure perfection. Great job.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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You are doing a fantastic job with this novel. With each post I read it gets better and better. You are writing pure perfection. Great job.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, Barbara. What a generous and heart-warming review. I really appreciate it! :) Bev
Comment from Dean Kuch
Another fine example of your prowess as a detailed, descriptive and wonderfully talented writer, Bev...
I feel helpless because I feel so sorry for Jada. It's almost as if I've gotten to know her, and I want to warn her, to tell her that the Devil, himself is hot on her heels (no pun intended), but can only sit back, helplessly reading away and watching everything unfold.
The tense atmosphere permeated every word, in nearly every paragraph of this chapter of the continuing saga from the Along the Jericho Road series/book.
Book of the month once again, perhaps? Well, I don't see why not, Bev!
Most excellent...
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Another fine example of your prowess as a detailed, descriptive and wonderfully talented writer, Bev...
I feel helpless because I feel so sorry for Jada. It's almost as if I've gotten to know her, and I want to warn her, to tell her that the Devil, himself is hot on her heels (no pun intended), but can only sit back, helplessly reading away and watching everything unfold.
The tense atmosphere permeated every word, in nearly every paragraph of this chapter of the continuing saga from the Along the Jericho Road series/book.
Book of the month once again, perhaps? Well, I don't see why not, Bev!
Most excellent...
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Dean, you are always so gracious. Thank you for this grand review as I truly admire your ability to write the supernatural/horror genre. I do have a few more surprises up my sleeve, but this has always been, for me, about Father Brian's faith. Warmest regards, Bev
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I'll just bet you do, Bev. I can't wait to see you reveal them.
You are always welcome, my dear friend. That goes without saying.
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Comment from Adri7enne
Aaron Noff doesn't really register with me. Guess it's been a while since he's made an appearance. One of the bad guys, I guess. Well written, Bev. I like the vernacular.
Reading on, I discover they're police and I seem to remember them from the last crime scene. Cool!
I enjoyed your imaginative car landing. Fun to play with the laws of nature, uh? Very creative, Bev.
Oh, now I finally read the notes and remember who the guys are. I'm not very 'with it', today. I enjoyed the read, Bev.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Aaron Noff doesn't really register with me. Guess it's been a while since he's made an appearance. One of the bad guys, I guess. Well written, Bev. I like the vernacular.
Reading on, I discover they're police and I seem to remember them from the last crime scene. Cool!
I enjoyed your imaginative car landing. Fun to play with the laws of nature, uh? Very creative, Bev.
Oh, now I finally read the notes and remember who the guys are. I'm not very 'with it', today. I enjoyed the read, Bev.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Thanks Adrienne. Aaron and Matthew haven't been featured in quite a while. They've been on hold until I could find a use for them LoL.
I really appreciate your generous review and support for the write, my friend. So glad you 'enjoyed' reading.
Comment from CR Delport
If I saw what they did, I would also like to get the hell out of there. This is another brilliant chapter that is really well written. The story flow is great and the dialogue excellent. You describe the scenes very well.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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If I saw what they did, I would also like to get the hell out of there. This is another brilliant chapter that is really well written. The story flow is great and the dialogue excellent. You describe the scenes very well.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Thanks so very much for this gracious and generous review, CR. I much appreciate the encouragement. :) Bev
Comment from jadapenn
Ooh, exciting reading, dear Bev. You could say the devil is after Jana. Boy, what a performance with the car rolling and Matthew and Aaron watching the whole scene. Lots of good tension and conflict. Loved it. luv jada
The unmistakable rumble of a souped-up engine drowned out (Michael's)[Matthew's] reply.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Ooh, exciting reading, dear Bev. You could say the devil is after Jana. Boy, what a performance with the car rolling and Matthew and Aaron watching the whole scene. Lots of good tension and conflict. Loved it. luv jada
The unmistakable rumble of a souped-up engine drowned out (Michael's)[Matthew's] reply.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Thanks so much, Jada. I'm so pleased you found the chapter tense. That's what I was aiming for! Your encouragement and generosity are much appreciated, my friend.
Hugs, Bev
Comment from missjosi
Very well written with a developed plotline and great cast of characters! Worthy of being able to be found in any library. Keep up the great work Kindest Regards Josi
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Very well written with a developed plotline and great cast of characters! Worthy of being able to be found in any library. Keep up the great work Kindest Regards Josi
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much, missjosi. I really appreciate your kind words of encouragement and support. Have a great week! :) Bev
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, writingfundimension, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where jana and father brian crash into the bridge when noff and buell run them off the road
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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this is very well written, writingfundimension, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where jana and father brian crash into the bridge when noff and buell run them off the road
Comment Written 01-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2014
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Thank you so very much, Sweet. Your support is much appreciated.