Metamorphosis
a poem for children and the young at heart25 total reviews
Comment from Kingsland
Morph is a rather modern way of saying change. It is used quite frequently in science fiction, or fantasy. This was a well written verse that I enjoyed reading and responding to...
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Morph is a rather modern way of saying change. It is used quite frequently in science fiction, or fantasy. This was a well written verse that I enjoyed reading and responding to...
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Thank you for sharing my poem.
Comment from RYME4U
This is very delightful to read. I like the whimsical tone and the rhyme and rhythm are smooth and even. The question at the end is so precocious and cute. Great job!
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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This is very delightful to read. I like the whimsical tone and the rhyme and rhythm are smooth and even. The question at the end is so precocious and cute. Great job!
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Your reaction to my poem is EXACTLY what I was looking for. I truly was trying to convey a "whimsical" tone. Thank you so much for sharing!
Comment from NamastaLee
I love this poem! "You pause to pull your backside up,
but only move an inch and stop." That is such a cute observation that a child would definitely make. Reminds me of my childhood, as I spent a lot of time outside and loved bugs and butterflies and plants and all that. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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I love this poem! "You pause to pull your backside up,
but only move an inch and stop." That is such a cute observation that a child would definitely make. Reminds me of my childhood, as I spent a lot of time outside and loved bugs and butterflies and plants and all that. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your great review and rating, namasta. I am especially flattered that you, the reader, could relate to the way the young speaker observes nature.
Comment from Debra White
Hi :) Thank you so much for entering the contest.
I adore your take on the prompt. You bring the child's 'voice' to life and the observations about how the caterpillar moves, well I could hear my 6 year old daughter noticing and commenting on the same things...
Excellent rhyme and meter, lovely subject and gorgeous presentation.
Good luck in the booth :) Kindest regards, Debra
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Hi :) Thank you so much for entering the contest.
I adore your take on the prompt. You bring the child's 'voice' to life and the observations about how the caterpillar moves, well I could hear my 6 year old daughter noticing and commenting on the same things...
Excellent rhyme and meter, lovely subject and gorgeous presentation.
Good luck in the booth :) Kindest regards, Debra
Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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Debra, I am especially flattered since you initiated this contest. I am delighted this shortie gave you pleasure and that you could visualize your daughter as the speaker. Thank you so much for sharing and the marvelous rating.
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You're more than welcome :)
Comment from Andrewajgblue
This was so cute and endearing, your wording was excellent you carried the theme forward well and the presentation was great, I enjoyed it very much,
Andrew
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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This was so cute and endearing, your wording was excellent you carried the theme forward well and the presentation was great, I enjoyed it very much,
Andrew
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Comment Written 23-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2014
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I am delighted you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing!