A Picture's Worth a Thousand Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "The Beast Within"A compilation of pictapoems from my portfolio
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Comment from Righteous Riter
Good use of the abab rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good rhythm and flow. Good alliteration with which/wants...soil's/soil...thinnest/thread...consummate/chaos...embracing/each...forth/from...wickedness/which. Good complimentary photo followed by a thought provoking message.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Good use of the abab rhyme scheme. Good end rhyming. Good rhythm and flow. Good alliteration with which/wants...soil's/soil...thinnest/thread...consummate/chaos...embracing/each...forth/from...wickedness/which. Good complimentary photo followed by a thought provoking message.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thank you, my brother. Much obliged.
Comment from robina1978
Very impressive picture that complements your rhyming poem extremely well. I did not realise till your foot note that it was about politics and not just normal monsters.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Very impressive picture that complements your rhyming poem extremely well. I did not realise till your foot note that it was about politics and not just normal monsters.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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That was the whole point for writing it the way I did, LOL. I'm very grateful for your thoughtful review, Robina.
Comment from country ranch writer
Forgiven my friend there is quite a lot going on in the world right now that has everyone on the edge of their seats and at the end of their wits
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Forgiven my friend there is quite a lot going on in the world right now that has everyone on the edge of their seats and at the end of their wits
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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You've got that right!
Hey, BTW, I loved your stuck in the elevator story. I just got to read it, and it was great! Good work.
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more reading for your to catch up on have you started reading the accused?
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Not yet, still getting caught up. But, I will.
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Please let me know what you think of it it is still a work in progress
Comment from DR DIP
HEHE love it...Hidden beneath a Kuchism!
you never let me down..You are the King of rhyme and as much as you say rhyme is not your thing you do an admirable job every time well done dean..next Obama and the white house for you!! lol
dip
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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HEHE love it...Hidden beneath a Kuchism!
you never let me down..You are the King of rhyme and as much as you say rhyme is not your thing you do an admirable job every time well done dean..next Obama and the white house for you!! lol
dip
Comment Written 08-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Hah, thanks, dipster! I'm very glad you liked it. No White House for me, my friend. Too many prying eyes, LOL...
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Once again a very well written and presented poem.
Forgiveness is not necessary for in a democratic society we all have the right to voice our opinions on topics we are passionate about.
You have done just that and very well too.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Once again a very well written and presented poem.
Forgiveness is not necessary for in a democratic society we all have the right to voice our opinions on topics we are passionate about.
You have done just that and very well too.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thanks, seken58. I really appreciate your comments and thoughts.
Comment from lancellot
A very true and much needed rant. If only more people would look around and really think about what they are undoing. Our founders knew evil lay in hearts of every man, which why they first divided government and the placed limits on it.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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A very true and much needed rant. If only more people would look around and really think about what they are undoing. Our founders knew evil lay in hearts of every man, which why they first divided government and the placed limits on it.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thanks, Lance, and they are slowly whittling away a each and every one of those limits. I appreciate your views on this one!
Comment from Spitfire
What's to forgive? Ah, your pessimistic outlook. Unfortunately, this rings true. There's not many out there who remain uncorrupted when song lyrics and movies encourage hedonistic behavior. A fine ending on this--the answer to avoid the demon.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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What's to forgive? Ah, your pessimistic outlook. Unfortunately, this rings true. There's not many out there who remain uncorrupted when song lyrics and movies encourage hedonistic behavior. A fine ending on this--the answer to avoid the demon.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Hah, me...pessimistic? Perish the thought... I don't mean to be, really, I don't. But, just as you stated, everything around us encourages hedonistic behavior, and most of it is geared towards our youth. Get 'em while their young and tender.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me on this, Shari. I appreciate that.
Comment from GWHARGIS
LIked the realness of this. I always thought that politeness and politically correctness were confused. To be correct politically, you refuse to speak the truth. The politeness is okay. There seems to be no humor in being politically correct. Great scariness to this.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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LIked the realness of this. I always thought that politeness and politically correctness were confused. To be correct politically, you refuse to speak the truth. The politeness is okay. There seems to be no humor in being politically correct. Great scariness to this.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thanks very much, GW, and I agree! I'm really grateful for your kind comments.
Comment from GE Parson
Brother Dean,
As I read this poem I thought you had the old sinful man in mind, but when I read your explanation I can see the political correctness and phony two faced morality as you described it.
The blessing of the Lord be upon you this week end. -Jerry
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Brother Dean,
As I read this poem I thought you had the old sinful man in mind, but when I read your explanation I can see the political correctness and phony two faced morality as you described it.
The blessing of the Lord be upon you this week end. -Jerry
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thanks, Jerry, I really appreciate that my friend.
Comment from His Grayness
Yoooohoooo Dean!! Now there's a ten where even a humble six lays trembling in next weeks inventory and could not sing loud enough!Fantastic work, marvelous packaging and rock solid logic. Good for you my friend..well said. Vance
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Yoooohoooo Dean!! Now there's a ten where even a humble six lays trembling in next weeks inventory and could not sing loud enough!Fantastic work, marvelous packaging and rock solid logic. Good for you my friend..well said. Vance
Comment Written 07-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2014
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Thanks, Vance. I'm really glad you liked this one! Have a fabulous weekend.