The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "The Light that Dims"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from Gungalo
Be saddened not
embrace thy age
even roses vibrant
color fades
The light that dims
perpetually will shine
Pressed between
Love's pages of time
Carolyn your poem that just popped out on these pages is so beautiful. Sigh love lasts forever.
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Be saddened not
embrace thy age
even roses vibrant
color fades
The light that dims
perpetually will shine
Pressed between
Love's pages of time
Carolyn your poem that just popped out on these pages is so beautiful. Sigh love lasts forever.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2014
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Hi there, so glad you enjoyed this one Pam. It is amazing what love can do. Sigh right back. :-) Carolyn
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Hi Carolyn. It surely is.