Heaven's Raven- Ode to Death
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, anupam, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the journey of the soul that death takes it on. I enjoyed reading it, great imagery presented here
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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this is very well written, anupam, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the journey of the soul that death takes it on. I enjoyed reading it, great imagery presented here
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you! :)
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Wow, if I had a six you would have it. I liked your author notes: Death isn't always sinister, nor should it be. The ode you have written, while lengthy, flows well with content that maintains the interest of the reader.
Oh, resplendent raven
you are an angel in disguise
you carry over souls
to the hallowed Heaven.
Well penned, :-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Wow, if I had a six you would have it. I liked your author notes: Death isn't always sinister, nor should it be. The ode you have written, while lengthy, flows well with content that maintains the interest of the reader.
Oh, resplendent raven
you are an angel in disguise
you carry over souls
to the hallowed Heaven.
Well penned, :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Hi, Carolyn. :)
Even the virtual stars have the same value for me. :)
I am glad you liked it so much. I appreciate your thoughts.
Have a great day!
Comment from Capricorn30
The raven does not always symbolize the darkness of evil, as well-expressed in your ode to this sable bird;
Good alliteration of:
"bloodless ballerina:
"silver shades" -- also provide visual imagery of an eerie transformation.
Excellent!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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The raven does not always symbolize the darkness of evil, as well-expressed in your ode to this sable bird;
Good alliteration of:
"bloodless ballerina:
"silver shades" -- also provide visual imagery of an eerie transformation.
Excellent!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much for the gift of six stars. I appreciate it. I am pleased you enjoyed this! :)
Comment from Marillion
My friend, this is quite powerful, and very comforting to any who read it with an open mind. It's not in a discernible meter, but I'm reading it as if that was your intent. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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My friend, this is quite powerful, and very comforting to any who read it with an open mind. It's not in a discernible meter, but I'm reading it as if that was your intent. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. I agree, it has no specific meter, nut just words.
Have a great day! :)
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good poem I like the way it flows and the picture very nice it is a modern piece as well which I like good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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This is a good poem I like the way it flows and the picture very nice it is a modern piece as well which I like good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from rouskin
Best of luck in your contest Nice contest entry with clear message :
Oh, resplendent raven
you are an angel in disguise.
You carry over souls
to the hallowed Heaven.
Well done
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Best of luck in your contest Nice contest entry with clear message :
Oh, resplendent raven
you are an angel in disguise.
You carry over souls
to the hallowed Heaven.
Well done
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you!
Comment from Asyraf N. Jamsari
A very well written piece of writing. Im blown away with your words and the depths in the poem. Amazing words choice and vocabulary. Good anticipation and well thought concept. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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A very well written piece of writing. Im blown away with your words and the depths in the poem. Amazing words choice and vocabulary. Good anticipation and well thought concept. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much, Asyraf, for the shining stars. I appreciate your comments. So pleased you enjoyed this.:)
Comment from Jean Lutz
Temptation is found scattered throughout the Bible -- From Genesis to Revelation; the beginning and the end. We should remain vigilant.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Temptation is found scattered throughout the Bible -- From Genesis to Revelation; the beginning and the end. We should remain vigilant.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much! :)
Comment from 24chas
I liked this piece, Anupam. It was original and very creative. Great imagery and flow throughout. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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I liked this piece, Anupam. It was original and very creative. Great imagery and flow throughout. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much! :)
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a poem that goes from the fear of death to the hope of everlasting pain-free life. It seems to be of a person dying of cancer or some other painful ending that leads to a better place.
Well written and formatted.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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This is a poem that goes from the fear of death to the hope of everlasting pain-free life. It seems to be of a person dying of cancer or some other painful ending that leads to a better place.
Well written and formatted.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much! :)
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You are so very welcome.
dragonpoet
