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Pink Decadence

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Comment from MoonWillow
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Oh this is beautiful! Very well done, Anon. Only one thing, no author's notes for this prompt. I thank you so much for joining. Gorgeous work on this! :)MW

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
    Thank you MW, and I removed the "author's notes" Thank you for pointing that out. Hugs
reply by MoonWillow on 31-Jan-2014
    You're welcome. I had it in the rules, just wrote it in the wrong area. Next time I'll know. :)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
    I changed my description line, also, but sure it changed much. It is a real job to pull one of these contests off properly, and I've done a few. But you need to "stick to your guns," and not let us get away with anything. Hugs
reply by MoonWillow on 31-Jan-2014
    Then I'm sure you know why I say no other comments in the description line...people have a tendency to write more up there than what's in the poem, LOL.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
    Exactly, I usually hate author's notes that are ten times longer than the poem. Good luck
Comment from zanya
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Is There is a flower more beautiful than the peony and the scent is exquisite yet their time is brief - well captured here and the complimentary pic

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
    No there is no more beautiful flower in my mind, even better than roses. Thank you for the positive review.
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
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What a pretty 5-7-5 this is! "Explode" is a good strong verb that gives energy to the subject. The peony is a lovely flower, and this presentation is lovely as well. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2014

reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
    I'm thrilled you liked it, Jeanie. I do love peonies.