Attitude
It all begins and ends with me26 total reviews
Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written nonet poem. Your message about attitude is clear. This nonet poem is in good order. I liked the line,
Only I can change it
That is so true. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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This was a well written nonet poem. Your message about attitude is clear. This nonet poem is in good order. I liked the line,
Only I can change it
That is so true. Nicely written.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thank you for reviewing. The bottom line is that it is the only thing we really have control over.
Comment from Jean Lutz
Your artwork and writing fit together like a hand and glove. A catitude is attitude on steroids. The overall image made me smile. Best to you with the entry.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Your artwork and writing fit together like a hand and glove. A catitude is attitude on steroids. The overall image made me smile. Best to you with the entry.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Ha ha. Never heard that one before. Pretty clever. Thank you for enjoying.
Comment from Dklrdmcches
Very well written. Great job with the emotion, it was stern, yet, playful. You injected your personality within really well. The flow made the read that much better. This was a pleasure to read and I wish you the very best of luck...dark lord
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Very well written. Great job with the emotion, it was stern, yet, playful. You injected your personality within really well. The flow made the read that much better. This was a pleasure to read and I wish you the very best of luck...dark lord
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thanks for the detailed review. Bottom line is that it is the only thing we have any control over.
Comment from MoonWillow
Great start with this, Anon. Just wanted to let you know before the contest starts, that you only have 8 lines...there should be 9. 9 syllables down to one syllable. :)MW
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Great start with this, Anon. Just wanted to let you know before the contest starts, that you only have 8 lines...there should be 9. 9 syllables down to one syllable. :)MW
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Thanks for heads up. That's what happens when I am tired..lol
thank again...corrected and added music video.
Comment from LorraineK
I enjoyed reading your poem on attitude. It is a poem that makes you think. I liked your choice of words, especially the autonomous, synonymous, anonymous which of course rhymed.
Good luck in the contest. LorraineK
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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I enjoyed reading your poem on attitude. It is a poem that makes you think. I liked your choice of words, especially the autonomous, synonymous, anonymous which of course rhymed.
Good luck in the contest. LorraineK
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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thanks for reviewing and welcome to fanstory.
Comment from 24chas
A very effective piece of writing. I liked the flow and the rhythm in this piece. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
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A very effective piece of writing. I liked the flow and the rhythm in this piece. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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thank you for reviewing and the good luck wishes.