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Comment from kiwijenny
Listen for the floorboard's creak......Christmas is a magical time
Christ is near....but I feel Him near every day..
God bless
Happy new year
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Listen for the floorboard's creak......Christmas is a magical time
Christ is near....but I feel Him near every day..
God bless
Happy new year
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from rouskin
Another brilliant write
My old green jacket full of wear
Empty pockets good mem'ries there
No thoughts of what I can't provide
Pure love of Jesus dwells inside
I think it could be number one on the charts
with the title Green Jacket.
Merry Christmas ans Happy Holidays
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Another brilliant write
My old green jacket full of wear
Empty pockets good mem'ries there
No thoughts of what I can't provide
Pure love of Jesus dwells inside
I think it could be number one on the charts
with the title Green Jacket.
Merry Christmas ans Happy Holidays
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from denhagan
This is a nice Christmas poem song, written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Beautiful picture to accompany the poem.
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This is a nice Christmas poem song, written in the quatrain style with good rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Beautiful picture to accompany the poem.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from Connie C
What a lovely Christmas poem this is, Michael. With wonderful imagery, you capture the very essence of Christmas. I especially like your second stanza where the children can't sleep and are listening for the creaking of loose floorboards. And what a beautiful picture you selected to accompany this.
Merry Christmas!
Connie
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What a lovely Christmas poem this is, Michael. With wonderful imagery, you capture the very essence of Christmas. I especially like your second stanza where the children can't sleep and are listening for the creaking of loose floorboards. And what a beautiful picture you selected to accompany this.
Merry Christmas!
Connie
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from Matoshka
How very beautiful and full of Christmas memories of the past.
I loved your picture that fit your words so well. Yes, Christmas is a special time of year, for our Saviour, was born this day, so the world would have a second chance at eternal life. God Bless you for your write, and a very Merry Christmas
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How very beautiful and full of Christmas memories of the past.
I loved your picture that fit your words so well. Yes, Christmas is a special time of year, for our Saviour, was born this day, so the world would have a second chance at eternal life. God Bless you for your write, and a very Merry Christmas
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is nice. Telling us that getting presents is not what Christmas is all about! Not everyone is flush with money but we could All be flush with good cheer and celebrate the fact that our Lord and Savior was sent over 2000 years ago. Good work Michael. Nancy
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This is nice. Telling us that getting presents is not what Christmas is all about! Not everyone is flush with money but we could All be flush with good cheer and celebrate the fact that our Lord and Savior was sent over 2000 years ago. Good work Michael. Nancy
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from nelliesellie
Merry Christmas Mickey! Today we are all rich. We are surround by love from the King. Santa has helped with filling houses with joy. We remember Christmas pasts and feel more joy. Great work.
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Merry Christmas Mickey! Today we are all rich. We are surround by love from the King. Santa has helped with filling houses with joy. We remember Christmas pasts and feel more joy. Great work.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from amanda98653
Merry Christmas, Mikey!!!!
"Once again winter's snow is bold,
Those ancient stories will unfold
Tall Christmas tree, quick splash of light
bright ribbons dancing in crisp night"
flawless rhyme scheme. lovely words. beautiful imagery.
awesomeness! have a great one, Mikey.
hugs
Amanda
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Merry Christmas, Mikey!!!!
"Once again winter's snow is bold,
Those ancient stories will unfold
Tall Christmas tree, quick splash of light
bright ribbons dancing in crisp night"
flawless rhyme scheme. lovely words. beautiful imagery.
awesomeness! have a great one, Mikey.
hugs
Amanda
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from MoIronE13
Is this one of the RAP songs....LOL
Very nicely done.
Bring warmth and Light to the mind
Brings joy and hope to the heart
Brings presents with all the wrappings of Love
Say, where's mine?
Always a treat to read your works of ART..
Thanks brother and Merry Christmas to ALL..
Mahina
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Is this one of the RAP songs....LOL
Very nicely done.
Bring warmth and Light to the mind
Brings joy and hope to the heart
Brings presents with all the wrappings of Love
Say, where's mine?
Always a treat to read your works of ART..
Thanks brother and Merry Christmas to ALL..
Mahina
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013
Comment from Green Lake Girl
A dear, sweet poem for this Christmas season. Very well done, Mike. You did a nice job with imagery. "Eyes are closed, but not asleep." and "My old green jacket full of wear." Merry Christmas to you!
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A dear, sweet poem for this Christmas season. Very well done, Mike. You did a nice job with imagery. "Eyes are closed, but not asleep." and "My old green jacket full of wear." Merry Christmas to you!
Comment Written 25-Dec-2013