The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Destiny's Cradle"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
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Comment from Righteous Riter
Good complimentary photo. Good use of the aabb rhyming scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with ride/side...rise/wise...side/wide...best/rest. Good description and alliteration. Good clear message that holds my attention from start to finish.
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Good complimentary photo. Good use of the aabb rhyming scheme. Good end rhyming. Good perfect rhyming with ride/side...rise/wise...side/wide...best/rest. Good description and alliteration. Good clear message that holds my attention from start to finish.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for this wonderful review and the attentiveness to quality. I appreciate that and that it kept your attention.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from Sylvia Page
Gorgeous view and a lovely poem. The serene river and beautiful words are a journey in itself. You have to be a lover of nature to appreciate and write like the way you do, Carolyn.
Good job in bring out the vivid pictures you write about.
Happy holidays,
Sylvia
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Gorgeous view and a lovely poem. The serene river and beautiful words are a journey in itself. You have to be a lover of nature to appreciate and write like the way you do, Carolyn.
Good job in bring out the vivid pictures you write about.
Happy holidays,
Sylvia
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I love my Fathers world. Thank you for this great review. Sylvia (Olivia) I trust you are improving daily. Love, Carolyn
Comment from Sueellen11
It sure is a beautiful spot,, piece of heaven on earth,, excellent poem,, beautifully worded and a great message to us al,, well done,,blessings to you,,sueellen,,merry Christmas
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It sure is a beautiful spot,, piece of heaven on earth,, excellent poem,, beautifully worded and a great message to us al,, well done,,blessings to you,,sueellen,,merry Christmas
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
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And Merry Christmas to you and yours. I always appreciate your reviews and enjoy reading them. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Frankeddy
Very lovely poem with the river reacting to the journey of life, how true.
Beautiful accompanying picture. Poem and picture presented in a colourful and
bright setting. Very well done.
Good work. Frankeddy
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Very lovely poem with the river reacting to the journey of life, how true.
Beautiful accompanying picture. Poem and picture presented in a colourful and
bright setting. Very well done.
Good work. Frankeddy
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
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Thanks Frankeddy for this great review. Glad you liked Destiny's Cradle. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Cajungirl
This is very beautiful. The river of life, the waters are rough yet calm.I will read this one to my eighty-seven year old mother. Her vision is not so great these days, but she enjoys hearing a good poem or story. Thanks for sharing.
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This is very beautiful. The river of life, the waters are rough yet calm.I will read this one to my eighty-seven year old mother. Her vision is not so great these days, but she enjoys hearing a good poem or story. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you for telling me you will read this to your Mother, please tell her hello for me. I am delighted you enjoyed Destiny's Cradle. :-) Carolyn
Comment from MERRY1
That is a very enjoyable poem and I like the simile of the river of life flowing along taking us through all he twists and turns and protecting us as we go until finally he calms it all down and takes us home. Well done
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That is a very enjoyable poem and I like the simile of the river of life flowing along taking us through all he twists and turns and protecting us as we go until finally he calms it all down and takes us home. Well done
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Merry1, I appreciate this insightful review, you got the meaning perfectly. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Bundhoo
Great !
This is really nice and beautifully written,I love the topic "DESTINY'S CRADLE " which convince me to write a review!!You are such a BIG POET:)
Regards,
Marwa:0
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Great !
This is really nice and beautifully written,I love the topic "DESTINY'S CRADLE " which convince me to write a review!!You are such a BIG POET:)
Regards,
Marwa:0
Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
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Hi there, I am happy you enjoyed Destiny's Cradle. Hope things are well with you. :-) Carolyn
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Don't mention it:)With the grace of Almighty all things are going well:)
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, notesandmore, you did anexcellent job writing this quatrain poem of the river of life that offers challenges and joys around each bend. i enjoyed reading it
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this is very well written, notesandmore, you did anexcellent job writing this quatrain poem of the river of life that offers challenges and joys around each bend. i enjoyed reading it
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you
Comment from B. Diehl
Every stanza is beautiful in this. But these two jumped out at me the most:
"When finally the sea's in view
And death is closing in on you
Have no fear if you rode the tide
And in His loving care abide
For the rivers bank on either side
of sparkling waters deep and wide
Portray a life-scene at it's best
Oh faithful one, you've earned your rest"
Very original and talented work. Keep it up. :)
-B<3
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Every stanza is beautiful in this. But these two jumped out at me the most:
"When finally the sea's in view
And death is closing in on you
Have no fear if you rode the tide
And in His loving care abide
For the rivers bank on either side
of sparkling waters deep and wide
Portray a life-scene at it's best
Oh faithful one, you've earned your rest"
Very original and talented work. Keep it up. :)
-B<3
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for this awesome review. I'm happy you liked Destiny's Cradle. :-) Carolyn