Jack and the Beanstalk
An acrostic fairy tale23 total reviews
Comment from Mteske
You did a great job using the acrostic poem format. You have great word choice- somnolent, despairing, glory etc. I really enjoyed this. However, there are few errors.
Errors- He fee- fie- foe- fumed.
Also, It left me wondering. Did jack climb down then lop it down?
Again, good job.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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You did a great job using the acrostic poem format. You have great word choice- somnolent, despairing, glory etc. I really enjoyed this. However, there are few errors.
Errors- He fee- fie- foe- fumed.
Also, It left me wondering. Did jack climb down then lop it down?
Again, good job.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you!
Steve
Comment from lakeport
Jack and the beanstalk, indeed that's a very lovely fairy
tale, very nice in Acrostic stle, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. lakeport.
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Jack and the beanstalk, indeed that's a very lovely fairy
tale, very nice in Acrostic stle, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. lakeport.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thank you!
Steve
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your welcome,Lakeport.
Comment from nancyjam
A great Acrostic that tells the tale of
jack and his magic bean fiasco.
Your version is much more fun than the original,
with its clever rhyme and quick paced meter.
so enjoyable. Nancy
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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A great Acrostic that tells the tale of
jack and his magic bean fiasco.
Your version is much more fun than the original,
with its clever rhyme and quick paced meter.
so enjoyable. Nancy
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2013
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Thanks, Nancy!
Steve