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Comment from Curly Girly
Together forever. When some people stay with us, it is like the sun shines...
A lovely, romantic poem.
stay with me and the sun will never know
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Together forever. When some people stay with us, it is like the sun shines...
A lovely, romantic poem.
stay with me and the sun will never know
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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I am so happy that you liked this. A most encouraging response. Very much appreciated. smiles.
Comment from Just Pete
A wonderfully worded poem that flows so well. Imaginative language and good use of repetition. Just enough rhyme to make it pleasurable to read. Romantic? definitely. I really liked this but I'm limited to five stars.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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A wonderfully worded poem that flows so well. Imaginative language and good use of repetition. Just enough rhyme to make it pleasurable to read. Romantic? definitely. I really liked this but I'm limited to five stars.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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awesome review. much appreciated. thank you very much.
Comment from dennis0530
Inviting your love at sunset to spend the night with you.
I perceive this as a creation about secret lovers stealing into the night to share moments of intimacy. You fulfilled the standard - romantic poem with a light and sweet theme.
You are wishing for a lovers' world only of your own - rain to hide your love; thunder to shield your kisses.
The rhythm and rhyme is still there - but most important its melodious flow is imminent.
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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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Inviting your love at sunset to spend the night with you.
I perceive this as a creation about secret lovers stealing into the night to share moments of intimacy. You fulfilled the standard - romantic poem with a light and sweet theme.
You are wishing for a lovers' world only of your own - rain to hide your love; thunder to shield your kisses.
The rhythm and rhyme is still there - but most important its melodious flow is imminent.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2013
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much appreciated. so glad you liked this. great encouraging words. much thanks.