Songs
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "How Can I Sing It?"Song lyrics with music attached
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Comment from Sankey
hey! I been here before. I wonder if it will let me through again. I loved hearing you sing this time around old mate.I said to another writer you two are lucky tonight as I came right in and reviewed these that I only just received. Still have stuff for you both still sitting in the book case.
Nice poem and the artwork was very suitable as well.Things are getting better NO SPAGS.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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hey! I been here before. I wonder if it will let me through again. I loved hearing you sing this time around old mate.I said to another writer you two are lucky tonight as I came right in and reviewed these that I only just received. Still have stuff for you both still sitting in the book case.
Nice poem and the artwork was very suitable as well.Things are getting better NO SPAGS.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Morning here. Glad you liked this. Thought I would put something clear and strait forward for a change. Nice review. Take your time on the others. much appreciated. mike
Comment from Eigle Rull
This was cool man. It was a very loving tribute to a sweetheart. I enjoyed reading it. The flow was great. It was interesting and it held my attention very well. It was excellent.
Always with respect,
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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This was cool man. It was a very loving tribute to a sweetheart. I enjoyed reading it. The flow was great. It was interesting and it held my attention very well. It was excellent.
Always with respect,
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Hey, thank you much. I had it bad when I wrote this. Ha! So, it came pretty easy at the time. Glad you liked it. thanks again, mike
Comment from Lylise
See, this is the kind of stuff that will get you in trouble here. Ha! Song lyrics don't go over that well on fanstory unless it's a lyric contest. People just don't get it. Being a song writer myself, I recognize the simplicity and beauty of this. Song lyrics need to be simple without your $10 words. This piece says a great deal so easily and that makes this an excellent post. I can't hit anymore high notes but the spot on harmony still sizzles. Great content here. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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See, this is the kind of stuff that will get you in trouble here. Ha! Song lyrics don't go over that well on fanstory unless it's a lyric contest. People just don't get it. Being a song writer myself, I recognize the simplicity and beauty of this. Song lyrics need to be simple without your $10 words. This piece says a great deal so easily and that makes this an excellent post. I can't hit anymore high notes but the spot on harmony still sizzles. Great content here. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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You don't think they have the means to fly in from other countries do you? I am missing a couple notes on top two. I have to tune my guitar lower to sing my own songs. But, that's a secret. OH NO!! now everyone knows. I think I will post one of my very strange song lyrics tomorrow. It will be fun because nobody will get it. Always a good time. I wrote this many moons ago during a madly in love phase. I go back and forth I guess from love struck to wanting to destroy earth. Very stable and sane. Thank you lovely woman, mikey
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Sounds like it is really happening? Must have that special person, to come up with that poem. I like the way you experiment with the way the poem's written. Maybe, your searching for your own blueprint which stands apart from the wolf pack. I like your romantic poem, like someone told me once, you got the bones for great poems, lurking inside. I only, follow a few people who stand out in the crowd, hopefully, a friend. After all, I can't give out six stars to everyone, only a limited few. Great going Michael, you set a good example of how hard work pays off, your most deserving. Good luck, wackydo, court jester
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Sounds like it is really happening? Must have that special person, to come up with that poem. I like the way you experiment with the way the poem's written. Maybe, your searching for your own blueprint which stands apart from the wolf pack. I like your romantic poem, like someone told me once, you got the bones for great poems, lurking inside. I only, follow a few people who stand out in the crowd, hopefully, a friend. After all, I can't give out six stars to everyone, only a limited few. Great going Michael, you set a good example of how hard work pays off, your most deserving. Good luck, wackydo, court jester
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Hey, my friend. so pleased you liked this. It is one of my songs from back in the day. During one of my "madly in love" phases that I go through from time to time. Those chicks man get ya all tellin' the truth and haven' feelings. Thank God is doesn't last! hahaha! I very much appreciate the six stars. thank you kindly. mikey
Comment from tbacha58
And how do I break through the walls
I built myself?
I wish for a moment,
you could see inside,
beyond my smile,
behind my eyes,
where I hide trembling.
Yes Mike, this is a beautiful picture working excellent with your charming strong poem of missing to love and be loved.
I enjoyed so much adding your suspense to the poem, by blaming yourself. Great poem. Hugs Terry
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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And how do I break through the walls
I built myself?
I wish for a moment,
you could see inside,
beyond my smile,
behind my eyes,
where I hide trembling.
Yes Mike, this is a beautiful picture working excellent with your charming strong poem of missing to love and be loved.
I enjoyed so much adding your suspense to the poem, by blaming yourself. Great poem. Hugs Terry
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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What lovely compliments my friend. So happy you enjoyed this. I have a bunch of songs from back in the day that no one has ever heard. Maybe I will add the music to this one day. mikey
Comment from l.raven
Just sing it!!! Hi Michael, I love your words. .I wish I could admit, how I need you to hold me, like a baby and protect me from the world. Once in awhile I do...make me feel secure...So just sing it!!! Love every word...picture says it all...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Just sing it!!! Hi Michael, I love your words. .I wish I could admit, how I need you to hold me, like a baby and protect me from the world. Once in awhile I do...make me feel secure...So just sing it!!! Love every word...picture says it all...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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I just might! I am delighted you liked this. From one of my many "madly in love" periods. Is there any other way? mikey
Comment from CR Delport
Yeah, I won't sing to my love. That would leave scars for life :) This is a well written poem that is very touching. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Yeah, I won't sing to my love. That would leave scars for life :) This is a well written poem that is very touching. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Hahaha! I am remembering "My Best Friend's Wedding" and the singing that backfired on Julia Roberts. I am glad you liked my little song. Maybe I will add the music one day. mikey
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Would love to hear it sung and the notes hit. Feeling put to a song is like heaven to a prayer.
LOved the words. Meaning is clear and beautifully expressed
See, there is a not so totally deep side
Oh I am in love, OMG dear friend, please, I have the warm bath ready, my body is in it, I have candles all around, the wine is chilled (well grape juice, I don't drink), and I am ready for the voice and the song to sit in that chair and sing to me.
Honestly I was mesmerized. Thank you.
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Would love to hear it sung and the notes hit. Feeling put to a song is like heaven to a prayer.
LOved the words. Meaning is clear and beautifully expressed
See, there is a not so totally deep side
Oh I am in love, OMG dear friend, please, I have the warm bath ready, my body is in it, I have candles all around, the wine is chilled (well grape juice, I don't drink), and I am ready for the voice and the song to sit in that chair and sing to me.
Honestly I was mesmerized. Thank you.
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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That is a nice line right there. Yep, I thought I better put something in English for a change. hahaha. Glad you liked it. I remember very well the feelings I had when I wrote this. I did and always do fall crazy in love. mikey
Comment from songbyrd
I've got some of those from long, long ago as well. Sometimes I look at them and ask where was I at in my head when I wrote that song? But it's beautiful and I'm sure you can still hit every single note of this sweet melody.
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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I've got some of those from long, long ago as well. Sometimes I look at them and ask where was I at in my head when I wrote that song? But it's beautiful and I'm sure you can still hit every single note of this sweet melody.
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2013
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Glad you liked it. I have lots and lots. I have been making up songs since I could talk! Nice to hear from you. Lovely review. Remember, I said I could hit them and not that it would sound good. hahaha! mikey