5-7-5 (Man Cold)
A little wifely humor56 total reviews
Comment from Martin Chan
A good humor poetry composed in only three lines of 5-7-5 poetry format.
It has the humor element and also conforms to the syllable count. A good imagination written with a good presentation.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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A good humor poetry composed in only three lines of 5-7-5 poetry format.
It has the humor element and also conforms to the syllable count. A good imagination written with a good presentation.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you so very much, I really appreciate your great feedback and wonderful review. :)
Comment from rockmann
Wait! What? Are you saying that men exaggerate how bad they feel when they have a cold? Well, yeah, I guess that's true. Have been there a time or two myself. Nicely written and sure made me smile.
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Wait! What? Are you saying that men exaggerate how bad they feel when they have a cold? Well, yeah, I guess that's true. Have been there a time or two myself. Nicely written and sure made me smile.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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So glad this made you smile :) Thank you so much for the great feedback it gave me a smile in return. I sincerely appreciate your kind words and wonderful review.
Stay germ free this cold season!
Smiles :)
Comment from nelliesellie
The picture is funny. He does look like a man in the middle of a cold. Men do not handle illness very well. It does rock their world. Thank goodness women are willing to nurse them. Great read.
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The picture is funny. He does look like a man in the middle of a cold. Men do not handle illness very well. It does rock their world. Thank goodness women are willing to nurse them. Great read.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for the very kind review and great feedback.
Smiles :)
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
This is just pitiful and so true. .... Well maybe not for every man but certainly for a few (one to be exact) I know. LOL Good luck, Carolyn
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This is just pitiful and so true. .... Well maybe not for every man but certainly for a few (one to be exact) I know. LOL Good luck, Carolyn
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you so very much!! Your wonderful feedback made me smile.
Have a great week!
Comment from mystery poet
You've summed it up for sure...
Poor thing, one cough and sneeze and off
to bed he goes.
Love the humorous tone and creative art.
Best wishes to you!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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You've summed it up for sure...
Poor thing, one cough and sneeze and off
to bed he goes.
Love the humorous tone and creative art.
Best wishes to you!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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:) Thank you, I appreciate your kind words and wonderful review.
Have a fabulous week!
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And you, also!
::}}LOL
Joyce
Comment from adewpearl
Love the pairing of art and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
good alliteration in death's door - add the apostrophe for possessive
I love the humor - my dad used to be like that - he was a big burly construction worker who turned into a little baby when he caught a little cold :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Love the pairing of art and poem, which is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
good alliteration in death's door - add the apostrophe for possessive
I love the humor - my dad used to be like that - he was a big burly construction worker who turned into a little baby when he caught a little cold :-) Brooke
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Brooke, Thank you so much for the fabulous feedback, I always am so appreciative of your thoughtfulness and thoroughness. Your reviews always help me improve.
:)
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is a good 5/7/5 - very amusing and I would imagine written by a woman, because it's always assumed that men make a bigger fuss about a simple cold than women do. A man would hardly write or admit to this. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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This is a good 5/7/5 - very amusing and I would imagine written by a woman, because it's always assumed that men make a bigger fuss about a simple cold than women do. A man would hardly write or admit to this. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
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Dorothy,
Thank you for the great review :)
Comment from michaelcahill
I found this quite amusing. It did garner a laugh yes. but, there was quite a bit more depth to this regarding relationships and the difference between men and women. A lot going on for such a short piece. well done, mike
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I found this quite amusing. It did garner a laugh yes. but, there was quite a bit more depth to this regarding relationships and the difference between men and women. A lot going on for such a short piece. well done, mike
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
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Mike,
Thank you so much for the great review and thoughtful feedback.
Comment from GregoryCody
Haha great form and a great message. Its funny, witty and creative. I love the flow too. Its a man cold. Has we've ll been there. Babies ;)
Great job!
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Haha great form and a great message. Its funny, witty and creative. I love the flow too. Its a man cold. Has we've ll been there. Babies ;)
Great job!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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:) So glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback and review. :)
Comment from honeytree
I absolutely love this art work and words.
I am glad it was only a cold
We know we get over our colds we hope?
The idea to write such a poem was great
Honey tree
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I absolutely love this art work and words.
I am glad it was only a cold
We know we get over our colds we hope?
The idea to write such a poem was great
Honey tree
Comment Written 15-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2013
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Thank you, I really appreciate your thoughtful feedback and this wonderful review. I was excited to find such great artwork, our sister site always has the best.
:)