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The Heart of Poetry

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'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from vapros
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Introspection, for a writer, can fester into the block that you are describing. However, you seem to have multiple subjects in mind, from which to choose, rather than the plight of those who can't come up with any. 'Do your best and leave the rest to be composed another day. Well done.

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 Comment Written 10-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
    You got it so well. It is neat to see that you understand. There is always something a poet can write about, even if it's 'what am I going to write about'. Thank you , :-) Carolyn
Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very well written, notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this free style poem about the thoughts and prayers of the writer as he/she ponders of what to write.

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
    I appreciate your great comments on this one, so glad you enjoyed it. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Gungalo
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So bless my writing efforts Lord
and guide my pen, I pray
To do my best, and leave the rest
to be composed another day

I'd say you found what to write about today Carolyn. Beautiful quatrains too. Sigh It is wonderful girl.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
    You are a sweetheart, thanks Pam. Love, Carolyn
reply by Gungalo on 10-Oct-2013
    Thanks Carolyn.
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this tell exactly the story of t he poet who sometimes does not know what to write about, but with pen in hand and trust in God always finds something interesting to write .You did find a great poem with lots to say

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 Comment Written 10-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
    I appreciate your wonderful comments. Carolyn
Comment from allborn66
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This is a lovely poem. I like the way you handled your "writer's block." I hope you write something sweet and light - the tone gets heavy around Halloween.
Barbara

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 Comment Written 10-Oct-2013


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2013
    Doesn't it though.. Thanks for the great review. :-) Carolyn