Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

I'M GIVING THIS 10 STARS FOR OBVIOIUS REASONS! lol

thank you my dear friend for your very kind words and tribute...dip deceased, from mark the shark! that dean released, there after dark. how can he surf,when he now has no legs..whats it worth, to get some pegs!
no jaws will stop me with my passion..surfin with no legs is now in fashion!!

as always deep legless dip!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013

Bwa hah haaaaaa... you finally got to see it, outstanding! Pegs...that's priceless! I'm STILL laughing!

Hope I've sent you off with a...CHOMP!, hee hee...

reply by DR DIP on 23-Aug-2013

dm dm dm dm DM DM DM

Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

Your friend, Dipper, should love this, Dean. It should be in a frame, the graphics are a great compliment to you heartfelt send-off.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013

Hah, he just now read it. And, he did, very much! Mission accomplished!

Thanks for checking it out, BD, I sincerely appreciate that.

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

A great send off to your friend Dr.Dip, if you call being designated as smelly shark shit that. That picture is fabulous. The verse is hilarious, I sure liked it . Hope he does too. How come he is leaving?

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013

Check out his latest post, Tom. He says it far better than I could...

http://fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=641475

Thanks for your wonderfully funny review, my friend!

Comment from Cookie333

Excellent

You have me wishing I knew of this Dr. Dip my friend. So sorry to say that I do not, but your piece was quite funny, and I hope he sees it for the fantastic send off you had intended,
thank you my friend,
k

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013

He just had the chance to read it, Cookie. He loved it, and I am so glad. I'd hoped it wouldn't offend him in any way, but he's a smart guy, he saw it for the pure satire that it was intended to be.

Thanks for the great review!

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Now that's what I call an ode. I'm sure he got a good laugh when he read it. Nice rhythm and the funnies kept coming. Great job.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013

Hah, he sure did, GW, he just now got to read it. I am very happy that he did, he's been a very good friend. I will certainly miss him around here...

Thanks so much, again!

Comment from lindalcreel

Excellent

I'm sure your friend will be grateful for the tribute to him. The music wasn't as scary as the theme from jaws, but you got the message out just the same. Thanks for sharing and I hope your friend appreciates the well-intended humor behind this piece.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013

Thanks very much for checking this out for me, Linda. I do appreciate that!

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Hey, Dean, this is a marvelous send off for your friend. I'm sure there are some inside jokes here that I would enjoy if I understood, but your style is as exciting as ever and I always enjoy reading your non-conventional poems. Hugs, Lou

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013

He's an avid surfer, and always professes to be a part of the sea. A man with sea water running through his veins, if you will. In my poem, I made him a (smelly) part of the sea, itself,, ha ha!
Thanks, Lou, I appreciate it!

reply by Louise Michelle on 23-Aug-2013

Why don't you mention that in author's notes? Reader will better be able to enjoy the humor.

reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013

I will, thank you...

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

solid use of rhyming couplets including the good proximate rhyme of fast ass
In your final stanza the background picture colors obscure half the words
I'm sure dip will appreciate this :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013

Thanks for checking it out for me, Brooke. I do appreciate it. Yours is the first I have heard about the words being obscured by the picture. I wonder if it's just certain settings on some computers as opposed to others? I can see it perfectly on my own computer. Hmmmm, I will have to be careful about that! But, it is an experimental style, and I do a a few bugs to work out. It's feed back like yours that I need...

Comment from david bell

Excellent

And I thought that I was a little bit strange. You almost have to have a twisted mind to write things that I only dare to dream about.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013

Hah, well, db, there are some on FS that would probably say my writing is a bit on the strange side of the fence. But, I like it over here, the water's very warm, heh heh...

Thanks for the read & review!

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Dean with your should I say humorous graphic and your poem in a satire way of waving farewell to Dr. Dip was yes,
so darn good
So I went and found dip and read his very emotional and praises to his Fanstory friends
Sorry I never met him until now..

Gert

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2013

He was/is one heck of a guy. He writes really simple poetry, but each one has a very funny, or clever, sometimes sad meaning. I'm going to miss him here...

Thanks, Gert.

reply by Gert sherwood on 23-Aug-2013

you are welcome How nice of you to like him as a fellow writer.

Gert