5-7-5 poem
DA's frailty25 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
We must never forget about the child within ourselves. The pain and traumas from the past still remain in us so we should feel free to cry like little children when there is a need.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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We must never forget about the child within ourselves. The pain and traumas from the past still remain in us so we should feel free to cry like little children when there is a need.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your candid reflection, personal remarks and intimate
reference. teafor2
Comment from Neonewman
Oh, wow. What a powerful 5-7-5, Tea. Women are strong and endure more pain than should be allowed. It's too bad this wasn't a contest entry of sorts, because it would be a winner.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Oh, wow. What a powerful 5-7-5, Tea. Women are strong and endure more pain than should be allowed. It's too bad this wasn't a contest entry of sorts, because it would be a winner.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Steve, thanks you for your thoughtful comments and personal remarks. teafor2
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My pleasure.
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:-)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. For me I thought your poem was saying that that no matter how grown we are - deep down we still feel things just as deeply as when we were young. It's a beautifully heartfelt poem! So well written.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I thought this was well written. For me I thought your poem was saying that that no matter how grown we are - deep down we still feel things just as deeply as when we were young. It's a beautifully heartfelt poem! So well written.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Michael, thanks for your discerning comments and personal remarks.
You got all of this one! teafor2
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A lovely channeling of a Bob Dylan song that I love. Very nice 5-7-5. One possible correction needed but I'm not sure. i think you might want an s on the word "trust". thanks for sharing. Lovely
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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A lovely channeling of a Bob Dylan song that I love. Very nice 5-7-5. One possible correction needed but I'm not sure. i think you might want an s on the word "trust". thanks for sharing. Lovely
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Marilyn, thanks for your personal comments, excellent suggestion and generous rating
Comment from kahpot
Love what you have written here, but must ask-who is DA? some women in certain roles must portray themselves as strong and assertive, but yes, still have feelings and emotions, very well written****kahpot
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Love what you have written here, but must ask-who is DA? some women in certain roles must portray themselves as strong and assertive, but yes, still have feelings and emotions, very well written****kahpot
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thanks for your thoughtful review, and honest query, but my muse is
fanciful:-) teafor2
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Does this mean D.A. is fanciful or all women
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Ok! I love your answer:-)
