Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Ine - Your rhyming nonsense poem is cute. I enjoyed the read very much. I like silly poems because laughter is like medicine. Kat

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine. TY for best wishes.

Comment from donaldww

Excellent

This poem is full of nonsense, and that is what the contest calls for. Grammy the Granny would enjoy this poem.

Cheers!
DW
Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine. TY for best wishes.

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

silly yes and indeed made for a fun read robina - whimsical and witty lines weaved together and a great title :) loved the music thanks for sharing it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine. TY for best wishes.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

It is always a nice gesture to honor a past loved one by laying a white rose on their grave and reflect on the fact that liked the rose, the loved one had to put up with a lot of shit to bloom. Charlie

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine. TY for best wishes.

reply by c_lucas on 22-Aug-2012

Yu're welcome, Robina. Charlie

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is cleverly done, and you've met the contest requirements with gusto. I got a kick out of the words you chose and how you put them together. The rhymes were great. Your title should get you some attention too. Best of luck in the contest. judi

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine. TY for best wishes.

reply by judiverse on 22-Aug-2012

You're welcome. I saw wthe contest posted but didn't think I could come up with something like that. But you certainly did. judi

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

thanks, not easy.

reply by judiverse on 22-Aug-2012

You're welcome, ine. judi

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

OK, you have done exactly what the contest asked for, and you did it proud! I love it, it is nonsensical yet there is a hint of a story there as well. Best of luck ina! Its a really good one! xsx

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine. TY for best wishes.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes you have done well with this nonsense poem I bet you had fun writing this you have done very well a good contest entry well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine. TY for best wishes.

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

Hi Ine, You did a good job with this nonsense poem. Just a concerned note, though: You're not allowed to make mention of voting in ANY way, not even just to encourage members to "vote for any prompt," so you might want to remove that from your author notes. (Recently, there was a rant by a member who lost the first place win because she reminded members to vote for the poem of their choice.) Hugs, Lois

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine. TY for best wishes. Will remove it.

Comment from squid152

Excellent

Pink Floyd sang a song about Vera Lynn on the Wall album. I liked your nonsense poem. Nice free thought that is right up my alley.-Gary

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine.

Comment from hari anand

Excellent

No horse shit for granny...a nonsense poetry....made sense to me...as it flows very smoothly......with interesting rhyming words.....

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2012

Thanks for your kind review and have a lovely day, Ine