Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi Mystery Author,

This is a delightful short fable. I have always loved the notion of Leprechauns and whose to say they don't exist? Leon just about had a calamity, thank heavens he can run fast! Well done and good luck in the contest....blessings, chey

 Comment Written 03-May-2012

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reply by the author on 03-May-2012

Thanks for reading my little story and giving it a 5. Leon indeed had a close call. Of course kids' stories need a happy ending.

Comment from cce29

Excellent

Excellent art work for your fable/short story. Especially children will love this fable/tale! I really like the moral of the story....it's good for all ages. Great contest entry. I look forward to reading more of your work

 Comment Written 03-May-2012

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reply by the author on 03-May-2012

Thanks for reading my little story and giving it a 5. You're welcome to read more of my work when the contest is over and I can tell you who I am.

Comment from Misrael

Excellent

Very good story and meaning. It was short, sweet and to the point. Keep up the good work and keep on writing. Good read and good job.

 Comment Written 03-May-2012

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reply by the author on 03-May-2012

Thanks for reading my little story and giving it a 5. I hope it was funny so that kids want to read it. Mine hated preachy stuff.

Comment from dportwood

Excellent

Author,

Yes, if you value something, keep it safe. This is very good advice. You have done well in writing this prompt and I wish you well in the contest.

Duane

 Comment Written 03-May-2012

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reply by the author on 03-May-2012

Thanks for reading my little story and giving it a 5. I haven't done so well in contests so far. Maybe my leprechaun story will bring me luck.

Comment from Shirley B

Excellent

I enjoyed your fable. I like the lesson if you value something, keep it safe. I love how you described the car getting a flat. This was very cute and I think children would love it. Best of luck to you in the contest, Shirley

 Comment Written 03-May-2012

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reply by the author on 03-May-2012

Thanks for reading my story and giving it a 5. I hope it came off as funny and not preachy.

reply by Shirley B on 03-May-2012

I thought it was cute and funny not preachy! :)

Comment from pharp

Excellent

A very well written story, short and to the point. I love the moral of this story. If you value something keep it safe. The artwork selected was perfect for this beautifully written story. Excellent job

 Comment Written 03-May-2012

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reply by the author on 03-May-2012

Thanks for reading my story and giving it a 5.

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

great moral and a great little story my friend loved reading it and great picture too thank you so much and all the best in the contest gazza

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 Comment Written 03-May-2012

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reply by the author on 03-May-2012

Thanks for reading my story and giving it a 5. I hope it came off as funny and not preachy.