Dream Searcher
A child learning in her sleep28 total reviews
Comment from TammyGail
This was a beautiful poem Honeycomb
I loved the imagery used
it works perfect with your poem
Your verse was creative and clever
thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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This was a beautiful poem Honeycomb
I loved the imagery used
it works perfect with your poem
Your verse was creative and clever
thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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Thank you Tammy. Thanks for the review and the kind words. I wish I had know about the banner ads before. I just found out about them. Can you just use them alone? Nancy
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I think you can
Comment from Bobbi22
This sweet poem sounds like something to tell a child a bedtime - all the exciting things to dream about tonight and experience tomorrow. Very well written.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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This sweet poem sounds like something to tell a child a bedtime - all the exciting things to dream about tonight and experience tomorrow. Very well written.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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Thank you very much for the review and the encouragement.
Honeycomb
Comment from Linda England Bonam
Very nicely done, Nancy! I really enjoyed reading this. It was so soothing and nice for the child. In the 2nd stanza third line and fourth line, both have the word 'the'.
Just thought I would let you know.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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Very nicely done, Nancy! I really enjoyed reading this. It was so soothing and nice for the child. In the 2nd stanza third line and fourth line, both have the word 'the'.
Just thought I would let you know.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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Thank you Linda. I sure misses that. I was trying to count the syllables so didn't notice. Thanks for the review and heads up! Nancy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
What a delightful poem! Your beautiful, well-crafted lines describe the precious innocence of childhood and our power to comfort them, making them feel safe. Just great
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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What a delightful poem! Your beautiful, well-crafted lines describe the precious innocence of childhood and our power to comfort them, making them feel safe. Just great
Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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WOW! A six. I figured everyone would have used them up by now. I try to only give one a day so I can be fair. Thanks for the review! Nancy
Comment from burton.0115
What a lovely poem!
I think this flows so beautifully and is written so well.
I agree the picture is inspiring.
Well done.
Mary
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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What a lovely poem!
I think this flows so beautifully and is written so well.
I agree the picture is inspiring.
Well done.
Mary
Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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Thank you Mary for the kind words and the review. Nancy
Comment from guinea
Great job. I loved the idea of the child dreaming and learning from her dreams. I was so loving. It showed deep thinking.
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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Great job. I loved the idea of the child dreaming and learning from her dreams. I was so loving. It showed deep thinking.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the review. I believe we all sort trough ideas as we dream whether we remember or not. Nancy
Comment from Carole Rosa
Nancy, your poem is light and magical. The artwork of the little girl is darling and the presentation is a cool offering of lovely feelings of freshness. Carole
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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Nancy, your poem is light and magical. The artwork of the little girl is darling and the presentation is a cool offering of lovely feelings of freshness. Carole
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Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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Thank you Carole.I think we all learn in dreams whether we remember them or not. Thanks for the review. Nancy
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Nancy I like the simplicity of your rhyme and to me a very emotional poem for a child (I just hope the child is old enough to -
learn in dreams, you'll sort it out,
you'll learn what life is all about
Gert
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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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Hello Nancy I like the simplicity of your rhyme and to me a very emotional poem for a child (I just hope the child is old enough to -
learn in dreams, you'll sort it out,
you'll learn what life is all about
Gert
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Comment Written 25-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2012
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I believe that is what dreams are for.Gert. I truly do. Maybe I should change the category to something else? Nancy
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It's you poem Nancy
Love
Gert
