The Glass Cat Eye
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Midnight Seance"Talking to the dead has its consequences
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Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
The assistant beg everyone's forgiveness (begged)
group of Spiritualist (s)
they ignor us; or they (ignore)
A few sgags. Wonderful artwork
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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The assistant beg everyone's forgiveness (begged)
group of Spiritualist (s)
they ignor us; or they (ignore)
A few sgags. Wonderful artwork
Comment Written 09-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2011
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Thank you. Will correct.
Comment from sizemore0409
I really enjoyed reading this quite intense and creative story-segment. It grabs the mind and heart of the reader from the very beginning, and holds it captive until the end. The setting is exceedingly well-crafted; and the character-depictions and interactions, the action, thoughts and emotions, and dialogue all flow very smoothly through that setting. My thanks to the author for an enjoyable reading-experience!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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I really enjoyed reading this quite intense and creative story-segment. It grabs the mind and heart of the reader from the very beginning, and holds it captive until the end. The setting is exceedingly well-crafted; and the character-depictions and interactions, the action, thoughts and emotions, and dialogue all flow very smoothly through that setting. My thanks to the author for an enjoyable reading-experience!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Oh wow, thank you. Your comments mean so much; this is my first attempt at a short story. Now if I can only finish it. Lol.
Comment from Veekz
Oh what a tease! Ha ha where's the rest?!
This is a great little story that had me sucked in right from the start; with 'cougars' and psychics how could I not? :)
Just going to be waiting on part B now....
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Oh what a tease! Ha ha where's the rest?!
This is a great little story that had me sucked in right from the start; with 'cougars' and psychics how could I not? :)
Just going to be waiting on part B now....
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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LOL Sorry, it's really not a tease; I haven't written it yet. I wanted to see if readers liked it first. I wanted to make sure I wasn't wasting my time with it. But if you really like it..I'll finish it as soon as I can. Again, thank you so much.
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Yes please! Hurry, hurry, hurry! Ha ha :)
Comment from ErinB
Good story! Great characters and realistic dialogue.
A few corrections, i.e.:
a minister"s daughter=minister's daughter
Mid-day three weeks after s©ance-Living Room= seance
He accessed the situation= assessed
The story flows nicely, but these slow it down a bit.
I can't wait to read the next part!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Good story! Great characters and realistic dialogue.
A few corrections, i.e.:
a minister"s daughter=minister's daughter
Mid-day three weeks after s©ance-Living Room= seance
He accessed the situation= assessed
The story flows nicely, but these slow it down a bit.
I can't wait to read the next part!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your keen eyes. I will make these corrections.
Comment from hevimama
I normally review poems but somehow I was drawn to your story. I just love how you started but I was sad when I got to the last line because I was itching for more. So when do I get to read the rest?
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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I normally review poems but somehow I was drawn to your story. I just love how you started but I was sad when I got to the last line because I was itching for more. So when do I get to read the rest?
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Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Oh, thank you. This is my first try at a short story other than excerpts from very short role-playing stories. I have no idea where I'm going from here, this is a short story in progress. If you have any ideas, I welcome them. I hope you're not disappointed that it's not finished. I put it on here because I need help and I thought I could get it here.