I'm Sorry To Have To Tell You This
A tale of a woman trying to get over.23 total reviews
Comment from fionageorge
Great dialogue, creating the imagery without having to use descriptive prose. I visualed the two characters, their appearance and their personality, just from this dialogue. Good luck in the contest, and warmest regards, Marijke
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2010
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Great dialogue, creating the imagery without having to use descriptive prose. I visualed the two characters, their appearance and their personality, just from this dialogue. Good luck in the contest, and warmest regards, Marijke
Comment Written 20-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2010
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Thank you so much for the great review and stars. The contest was supposed to be two person dialogue, so action tags and such weren't supposed to be used. The dialogue was supposed to stand alone.
Thanks you for the warm wishes for the contest.
Sandollar
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And you were very successful in meeting those conditions and still, through the dialogue, which did exactly that, stand on its own. Good luck
Comment from Realist101
GOOD exchange, very realistic! I used to work in a fancy department store, and had to deal a lot, with snobs. It was disgusting the way they put on airs...you did well with this!! Susan
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2010
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GOOD exchange, very realistic! I used to work in a fancy department store, and had to deal a lot, with snobs. It was disgusting the way they put on airs...you did well with this!! Susan
Comment Written 20-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2010
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Thank you for the great review and five star rating. I wanted to use that one because I always wondered how people could get up the nerve to wear clothes and bring them back used.
Thank you again
Sandollar
Comment from Nicki_Mist
Way too many people do this too! Great poem about people ripping off the stores and comapnies by wearing clothes ans using merchandize and bringing it back to the store after use. I would be ashamed to do that. Very descriptive and good imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Nicole
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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2010
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Way too many people do this too! Great poem about people ripping off the stores and comapnies by wearing clothes ans using merchandize and bringing it back to the store after use. I would be ashamed to do that. Very descriptive and good imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Nicole
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2010
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Tanks for the wonderful review and stars. I could never wear clothes and then bring them back like I didn't. That's why I chose this topic. I imagined what a salesperson or head supervisor might want to say to someone like that. Thank you, also, for the good wishes in the contest.
Sandollar
