Renewal
Free Verse; As the New Year dawns. . .116 total reviews
Comment from diane24
To one Diane from Another,
Well in these fine words you have definitely
expressed what many of us would have to
say at the end of one year and the beginning
of another. Each year, year after year, we
seem to do this don't we. Well, like you, I will
be a fool one more time. Bravo. diane
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To one Diane from Another,
Well in these fine words you have definitely
expressed what many of us would have to
say at the end of one year and the beginning
of another. Each year, year after year, we
seem to do this don't we. Well, like you, I will
be a fool one more time. Bravo. diane
Comment Written 09-Jan-2008
Comment from Winslow
Dear KT,
Memories come from the past, but we have a new year ahead of us. Break free, embrace the New Year. Lets build memories that will make us soar. An excellent poem about hope.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2008
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Dear KT,
Memories come from the past, but we have a new year ahead of us. Break free, embrace the New Year. Lets build memories that will make us soar. An excellent poem about hope.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 09-Jan-2008
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2008
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Dear Winslow...What a wonderfully kind review. I am deeply honored and humbled by your review. Thank you and best regards for a great new year. diane
Comment from EKPoet
I really enjoyed this piece. it is in a fresh, bold style, the fragments of sounds and images gave us an impression of emotions and the repetitions of patterns was very interesting musically. there were some minimalist aspects to this, also some impressionistic ones and some expressionistic ones..
i think you have a lot of talent, something to say, and you have created something fresh and new and exciting to read. this is the kind of poetry i really enjoy reading EKPoet
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I really enjoyed this piece. it is in a fresh, bold style, the fragments of sounds and images gave us an impression of emotions and the repetitions of patterns was very interesting musically. there were some minimalist aspects to this, also some impressionistic ones and some expressionistic ones..
i think you have a lot of talent, something to say, and you have created something fresh and new and exciting to read. this is the kind of poetry i really enjoy reading EKPoet
Comment Written 09-Jan-2008
Comment from BLACKDYKE
That just about covers this new year then. And I may say so cleverly put, in so many wise ways. New years resolution- To try not make a fool of oneself.
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That just about covers this new year then. And I may say so cleverly put, in so many wise ways. New years resolution- To try not make a fool of oneself.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2008
Comment from NadineM
Diane,
This poem is well-written and motivational in nature! It recognized the truths in our past, the disappointments and failures, the trials and pain. Your words also encourage us to get past all that and focus on what's ahead. The chance for a new beginning and opportunities to right some of the wrongs is here and now. To ignore that would be foolish!
Thank-you for sharing this poem with me. Great advice, I must say!
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Diane,
This poem is well-written and motivational in nature! It recognized the truths in our past, the disappointments and failures, the trials and pain. Your words also encourage us to get past all that and focus on what's ahead. The chance for a new beginning and opportunities to right some of the wrongs is here and now. To ignore that would be foolish!
Thank-you for sharing this poem with me. Great advice, I must say!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2008
Comment from PUPA
Hi Diane, and Happy and Blessed New Year to you too.
Every new beginning brings hope for the better and we should learn from mistakes of the past. You have captured the feeling of the New Year so perfectly with your well chosed words. Great writing. I loved it.
Love
Pupa
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Hi Diane, and Happy and Blessed New Year to you too.
Every new beginning brings hope for the better and we should learn from mistakes of the past. You have captured the feeling of the New Year so perfectly with your well chosed words. Great writing. I loved it.
Love
Pupa
Comment Written 09-Jan-2008
Comment from COMPTONS FINNEST
This is a wonderful poem and I enjoyed reading it. I hope my New Years does'nt find me a fool either. Well put together poem and enchanting piece of work. Keep up the good work.
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This is a wonderful poem and I enjoyed reading it. I hope my New Years does'nt find me a fool either. Well put together poem and enchanting piece of work. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2008
Comment from Senyai
Well, Diane, I will renew my New Year's resolutions and start afresh. Your poem has inspired me to pick up from the already broken promises and take heart to try once again to keep my resolve... I am serious.
Beautifully inspiring writing.
Take care in '08,
Foxey
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Well, Diane, I will renew my New Year's resolutions and start afresh. Your poem has inspired me to pick up from the already broken promises and take heart to try once again to keep my resolve... I am serious.
Beautifully inspiring writing.
Take care in '08,
Foxey
Comment Written 09-Jan-2008
Comment from manders
This is a wonderful piece - I like the thoughts back to the last year and how those things worked out. Good flow and structure to the poem.
Thanks for sharing :)
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This is a wonderful piece - I like the thoughts back to the last year and how those things worked out. Good flow and structure to the poem.
Thanks for sharing :)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2008
Comment from neiva
Yep, it that time. We reflect on yesterday, then hope for a better tomorrow.
That's what's nice about A New Year.
The artwork is awesome.
The blue background with pink font was genius of you to think of.
Renewal, was an excellent name for your poem.
I also liked the way you went back and forth in your poem.
great job.
neiva
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Yep, it that time. We reflect on yesterday, then hope for a better tomorrow.
That's what's nice about A New Year.
The artwork is awesome.
The blue background with pink font was genius of you to think of.
Renewal, was an excellent name for your poem.
I also liked the way you went back and forth in your poem.
great job.
neiva
Comment Written 09-Jan-2008