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Comment from royowen
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It seems like Debbie's gone but not forgotten, the biographies she writes are full of available information on the subjects of her talent to be able to convince that she's as careful with her information as she is with poetry, well done, blessings Roy
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 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thanks, Roy. Yes, I've learned so much about so many people from her, and I will miss her weekly biographies that are so packed with excellent poetry and well-researched notes.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a beautifully written poem for our dear friend And Debbie, and I am sure that she will enjoy it. It is very well written and it flows very well when it is read out loud. May you have a lovely day. Also wish the very best for Debbie in her absence. Patricia.

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thanks very much, Pat. I certainly do wish Debbie the very best in her absence. She will be sorely missed around here. I'm very glad you enjoyed this tribute to her.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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It is is nice to be appreciated publicly but every rose needs to retire every season after it blooms for a while to regain the strength to blossom again to be born again with the energy spent in the season just before they left

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    And I hope she will find what it takes to join us here again, refreshed and renewed. Thanks for reading, Tom.
Comment from Nicki.B
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Jim this a really beautiful tribute for Debbie! I really enjoyed it stanza after stanza, you showing appreciation for her work and review, just like I do! We will miss her so much for sure, but like I've said, she's gotta do, what's she gotta do!
You have a wonderful way with words ans I really enjoyed this!
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thanks so much, Nicki, for your wonderful review and those 6 stars. I tried to write this in the same rhyme scheme and meter Debbie uses in her poems. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. She will surely be missed by many here.
reply by Nicki.B on 02-Apr-2025
    You did a great job, it flowing beautifully! You are most welcome!
    Best Wishes
    Nicki
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem is such a heartfelt tribute. I can feel the warmth in every line. I especially love how you capture Debbie's impact - not just as a poet but as a friend. It's clear how much she means to you. This is a beautiful way to honor her. I'm sure she'll be deeply touched by your words!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Yes, she has certainly become one of my good friends here on FanStory. Such a positive person and so very nice. Thank you for your kind words, Michael.
Comment from Begin Again
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What a beautiful poem as tribute to Debbie. She's a wonderful writer, poet and friend. I know poems like yours will touch her and hopefully help in her speedy return. You did a marvelous job, Jim. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thanks so much, Carol. I think she will be missed by many here whom she has touched in a similar way. A very talented poet and reviewer she is.
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is a lovely tribute to Debbie, Jim. I'm sure she will be blessed as she reads it. You did a good job with the rhymes, and you gave good reasons why you value her writing and her reviews. Blessings. Carol

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 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thanks very much, Carol. I appreciate your kind words. Debbie has found a niche here that will be hard to fill--both a superb poet and fantastic reviewer. I can't wait for her return.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a wonderful tribute to Debbie as you pay her so many compliments about her poetry here Jim. As always, your metre is a joy and your rhymes are perfect and your poem is such a joy to read. A skilful post with a kind friendly message for Debbie, she will be missed, love Dolly x x x

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 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you so much, Dolly. One of the truly greats on this site, I think she will be sorely missed by many who have come to know and love her. I hope she returns soon.