Karen,Sandra, &, Deborah
We Miss Them Already27 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
It is indeed a tough transition, my friend. I wish them all the best in every future endeavor and in their heath issues.
I know my footprint has shrunk, but I have had to pursue other avenues.
Douglas
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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It is indeed a tough transition, my friend. I wish them all the best in every future endeavor and in their heath issues.
I know my footprint has shrunk, but I have had to pursue other avenues.
Douglas
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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email me and dish:-) Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from kahpot
A beautiful Tanka and prayers for our FS. friends, love the chosen artwork as all look so happy, (I know it's not them) very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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A beautiful Tanka and prayers for our FS. friends, love the chosen artwork as all look so happy, (I know it's not them) very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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It was hard to find a picture that would work. I appreciate the read. Karen
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and nice presentation, Karen.
-I like the way you did this, including Debbie and Sandra.
-I miss them already, too.
-You wrote a good tanka and begin with your feelings.
-A very good pivot line about "sweetness and love."
-Very good closing lines with the image of empty spaces,
and how no one can take their place.
-They will both appreciate your kind thoughts.
-They will be missed.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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-Good image and nice presentation, Karen.
-I like the way you did this, including Debbie and Sandra.
-I miss them already, too.
-You wrote a good tanka and begin with your feelings.
-A very good pivot line about "sweetness and love."
-Very good closing lines with the image of empty spaces,
and how no one can take their place.
-They will both appreciate your kind thoughts.
-They will be missed.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Karen wrote me, and said she hoped Ed gets better soon she sure misses us. She also sent the link to some friends.:-) Karen
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Thanks for sharing about Karen.
Comment from Neonewman
As we get older, we begin to lose those we hold dear. This is an excellent entry for the contest, Karen. It's well-crafted and certainly relatable. Sorry I've been away for a bit and missed a chapter. Work has been intolerable and we lost a cousin a few days ago.
I used another wolf picture today. Pretty scary fellow. Lol.
God bless, my dear friend.
Steve
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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As we get older, we begin to lose those we hold dear. This is an excellent entry for the contest, Karen. It's well-crafted and certainly relatable. Sorry I've been away for a bit and missed a chapter. Work has been intolerable and we lost a cousin a few days ago.
I used another wolf picture today. Pretty scary fellow. Lol.
God bless, my dear friend.
Steve
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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I am sorry for your ills at work. And for the passing of a cousin. Thanks for the read, and I will check your work. Karen
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My pleasure, Karen, and thank you.
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:-)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I agree these ladies will and are being missed. You did a wonderful job writing this entry. It has a personal touch to it. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I agree these ladies will and are being missed. You did a wonderful job writing this entry. It has a personal touch to it. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the read. I had a hard time finding a picture of three women that I thought would work.
Karen
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Tanka Poetry Contest. I agree. It is so difficult when things change and people we have come to love have to go away. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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An excellent entry for the Tanka Poetry Contest. I agree. It is so difficult when things change and people we have come to love have to go away. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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I am sad about it. They were like you and me, the right kind of crazy. Thanks for the read. Karen
Comment from Begin Again
What a picture, Karen! But I am sure it would give each of the girls a big chuckle and your words reflect my feelings and many others I am sure. Life's getting tougher every day seeing our friends slip away. Hang tough, girl friend.
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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What a picture, Karen! But I am sure it would give each of the girls a big chuckle and your words reflect my feelings and many others I am sure. Life's getting tougher every day seeing our friends slip away. Hang tough, girl friend.
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much for the read. It took me a while to find a good picture. I miss them already. Karen
