Emerald Isle
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Dessert"Invitation to Paradise
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am very interested in what happened with Eve. Thank you for sharing this addition with us. I can't wait to read more. This is very good writing.
filled up every corner of the room. (you don't need 'up')
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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I am very interested in what happened with Eve. Thank you for sharing this addition with us. I can't wait to read more. This is very good writing.
filled up every corner of the room. (you don't need 'up')
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Well, now, Barbara. you know YOU could bring your expert level of creativity to the table, yourself!! YOU could help decide what's happened to poor missing Eve!!! We sure could use some special pizzazz here!! Pleeeeeeeease, Barbara? xoxoxo
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Rachelle, I have thought about it, but right now I'm simply too busy to give it the attention it deserves. I'm not comfortable putting something out there that isn't the best I can do.
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I understand. I'm bummed, but I do understand. xo
Comment from pome lover
oh, this is one of those, huh? I'll have to read the previous chapters and see what's happenin', but to answer your rhetorical question at the top of the "page," I would say, absolutamente!
Ver-ry interesting, as that little fella with the German helmet on laugh In used to say. :) and good chapter!
Katharine
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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oh, this is one of those, huh? I'll have to read the previous chapters and see what's happenin', but to answer your rhetorical question at the top of the "page," I would say, absolutamente!
Ver-ry interesting, as that little fella with the German helmet on laugh In used to say. :) and good chapter!
Katharine
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thanks! I sure hope to see you among our co-contributors!!! xoxoxo
Comment from royowen
I'm not really a prose writer, but thank you for this great post, I love how you describe the show as if you are there directing the moves and the Musical steps of the characters and the interest of the crowd, well done Rachelle, good writing, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I'm not really a prose writer, but thank you for this great post, I love how you describe the show as if you are there directing the moves and the Musical steps of the characters and the interest of the crowd, well done Rachelle, good writing, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thanks very much, Roy. I appreciate your kind and encouraging feedback.
I bet ANYTHNG you could write a super fine chapter for this story!! Are you SUUUUUURE you don't want to step outside your comfort zone just this once? It would make all of us so happy!!!
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I'm publishing at the moment dear Rachelle, my typing skills are very limited too, bless you.
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Bummerrrrrrr!! But, of course, I understand.
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Thank you
