A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from Teri7
This is a great chapter. You used great descriptive words, and it made me think of when I was pregnant with twins. I remember telling my husband not to ever touch me again! At the time I was serious, but later we found that to be funny. Great words and dialogue. Can't wait to read mor! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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This is a great chapter. You used great descriptive words, and it made me think of when I was pregnant with twins. I remember telling my husband not to ever touch me again! At the time I was serious, but later we found that to be funny. Great words and dialogue. Can't wait to read mor! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Thank you for sharing your story and this kind review with me.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this was really well written. It's amazing that she's the only living out of eight pregnancies. Now she's pregnant herself and is obviously petrified as she's never encountered the world as we know it. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Hi Barbara, this was really well written. It's amazing that she's the only living out of eight pregnancies. Now she's pregnant herself and is obviously petrified as she's never encountered the world as we know it. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from jim vecchio
Once again, I found no errors. I wonder if there's any chance Rebeka, unknown to her, was adopted. Probably not. Dr. Tyler continues to display moral constrict and professional discernment. I'm waiting for their romance to take action.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Once again, I found no errors. I wonder if there's any chance Rebeka, unknown to her, was adopted. Probably not. Dr. Tyler continues to display moral constrict and professional discernment. I'm waiting for their romance to take action.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Thank you for a the kind review. It might be a while for romance. Rebeka isn't ready.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed reading your chapter. I love how you shared the emotions of the characters. Especially Rebeka's nervousness and how Tyler is there to support her every step of the way. The way you described the ultrasound made me feel like I was right there with them. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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I really enjoyed reading your chapter. I love how you shared the emotions of the characters. Especially Rebeka's nervousness and how Tyler is there to support her every step of the way. The way you described the ultrasound made me feel like I was right there with them. Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
Comment from Begin Again
You did a great job of showing Rebecca's fears and how Tyler is able to reach out to her and give comfort and support without embarrassing her. It appears her poor mother had a devasting time giving birth and then her father's teachings have put Rebekah in a very difficult spot... fearing the wrath of God...not so! Well done.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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You did a great job of showing Rebecca's fears and how Tyler is able to reach out to her and give comfort and support without embarrassing her. It appears her poor mother had a devasting time giving birth and then her father's teachings have put Rebekah in a very difficult spot... fearing the wrath of God...not so! Well done.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from Karen Cherry
It's a sad fact that this is a true story still for some. B ut, I promise you if men had the babies, this would never be the case I think it is high time the men started wearing the makeup instead of us. There are a lot more ugly men than women. :-) Good writing. Karen
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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It's a sad fact that this is a true story still for some. B ut, I promise you if men had the babies, this would never be the case I think it is high time the men started wearing the makeup instead of us. There are a lot more ugly men than women. :-) Good writing. Karen
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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LOL I don't wear makeup. I'm allergic all of it. Thank you for the funny review. I appreciate it.
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I wish no one wore makeup, had unnecessary surgery, Shots to inject stuff in our bodies, or dressed in any thing other than long pants,long sleeve shirts with no cleavage, or overalls. No see through fabric either. I wish all clothes were non sexuality created. Why do women have to do all the heavy lifting in the dress up department. Outlaw dresses unless men wear them too! Karen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Good plot progress.
She feels she damned to hell, and God will never forgive her. - oops
Rebeka glanced at Tyler's T-shirt she wore as pajamas. "No!" - I didn't get that she was exposed or anything. Maybe if you detailed a bit for the slower among us?
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Good plot progress.
She feels she damned to hell, and God will never forgive her. - oops
Rebeka glanced at Tyler's T-shirt she wore as pajamas. "No!" - I didn't get that she was exposed or anything. Maybe if you detailed a bit for the slower among us?
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Nothing was exposed. She just wasn't fully dressed. For her that wa enough. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
Wow! You wrote this so well, I felt like I was watching this on video. It was so intimate and yet not invasive. This felt like first hand type of detail. Rarely have I read a fictional account of something as intimate as this handled so well. This is class 'A' writing. Well done Barbara.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Wow! You wrote this so well, I felt like I was watching this on video. It was so intimate and yet not invasive. This felt like first hand type of detail. Rarely have I read a fictional account of something as intimate as this handled so well. This is class 'A' writing. Well done Barbara.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
