A Serendipitous Meeting
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Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You are developing your characters in a believable way. I look forward to the next installment. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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This is another excellent chapter. You are developing your characters in a believable way. I look forward to the next installment. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, I am now back after being unwell for some ten days. I will eventually write about it, if I'm still allowed to be on the site. You will soon know why. I really enjoyed this chapter, getting back into the story. Hugs, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Hi Barbara, I am now back after being unwell for some ten days. I will eventually write about it, if I'm still allowed to be on the site. You will soon know why. I really enjoyed this chapter, getting back into the story. Hugs, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. Please take care of yourself.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed this chapter! You did a great job making the dialogue feel
real. I could hear the characters' voices in my head. Tyler's kindness really stood out. And I loved how he reassured Rebeka. Your writing kept me hooked, and I wanted to keep reading more about these characters. Great job!
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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I really enjoyed this chapter! You did a great job making the dialogue feel
real. I could hear the characters' voices in my head. Tyler's kindness really stood out. And I loved how he reassured Rebeka. Your writing kept me hooked, and I wanted to keep reading more about these characters. Great job!
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Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Begin Again
Oh I wish I had a doctor like Tyler when I was pregnant...Three out of five were difficult ones....and most doctors especially back when...thought suck it up and move forward and then when things are dangerous...that's when they said shoulda, woulda, coulda. You write Tyler as a real caring man and I love it.
Enjoy the time with your son.....
Smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Oh I wish I had a doctor like Tyler when I was pregnant...Three out of five were difficult ones....and most doctors especially back when...thought suck it up and move forward and then when things are dangerous...that's when they said shoulda, woulda, coulda. You write Tyler as a real caring man and I love it.
Enjoy the time with your son.....
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the understanding. For my first three children, I had the same doctor. He was wonderful. I had a different doctor for each of my last two. They were okay.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I was in hospital for three months because I u hemorrhaged. Then they discovered I had placenta previa. That was with my youngest son. It was awful. But I was in good hands and Christopher lived. He's now 50.
I'm sure this baby will be safe in the hands of the dashing doctor. He sounds so nice. Have a nice time with your son on his birthday. Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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I was in hospital for three months because I u hemorrhaged. Then they discovered I had placenta previa. That was with my youngest son. It was awful. But I was in good hands and Christopher lived. He's now 50.
I'm sure this baby will be safe in the hands of the dashing doctor. He sounds so nice. Have a nice time with your son on his birthday. Warmest hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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I struggled hanging on to all my babies. My deliveries were a breeze except for my last one, emergency C-Section. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
I hope you have an enjoyable visit with your son. I'll miss your writings while you're gone. Your story continues well. Dr. Tyler seems like every woman's dream. I shared the same sentiments as the doctor, but never had the same admiration of women when young. I had to wait a little longer to find the right one.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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I hope you have an enjoyable visit with your son. I'll miss your writings while you're gone. Your story continues well. Dr. Tyler seems like every woman's dream. I shared the same sentiments as the doctor, but never had the same admiration of women when young. I had to wait a little longer to find the right one.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2025
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I do understand. Thank you for the kind review.
