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A poem

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Comment from Carol Clark2
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I like the five IFs about God, to begin this poem. Then you added one IF about us also. A good reminder of the entrance of sin into the world, and great Scriptures as well. Thankfully, God forgives in His mercy. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
    Thanks Carol, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from patcelaw
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How anybody could look across this world see the fantastic things that are in it and not believe that there is a God or a being much greater than man that has everything under his control. It just dumbfounds me that anybody could believe that there is no God. We all the times find that our ship of life is a drift at sea, but God has a way of bringing us back and putting us in the safe harbor. Patricia.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
    Thanks Pat, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Oh my goodness! It's unthinkable, and an unbearable thought that there is no God! What are we? If we are not God's children, then who are we? It doesn't bear thinking about. You have really given us a jolt here, Roy, that some people don't believe in Him, is so sad. What an incredible poem you've written, it was scary, but so well written. Well done, my friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
    Thanks Sandra, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
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Roy, This is a very well written poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from your words also. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
    Thanks Teri, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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Hi Roy, I loved this poem. I liked how you compared if there is a God and if there isn't. I think it is a soul searching poem and your words are so true. Well written. The picture is a great choice for the poem. Great job.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
    Thanks Brenda, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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God is the way, the truth, and the light. Thank you for sharing this beautiful reminder and your talent with us.

So when you hear, "Child come to me." He's made another plan. (So, & Child,)

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
    Thanks Barbara, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Always happy to see you post. We miss your words. Beautifully written and reminding us as always that there are no "ifs" where God is concerned. God just "IS". Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
    Thanks Marilyn, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from jaded831
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Your poem reminds me God is the way. Life on earth is bad and gets worse everyday. I pray all throughout the day and especially at night. I pray for peace, the world and our country.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
    Thanks for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from jim vecchio
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Glad to read this. I just voted for you for "Poem Of The Month" which you deserve. As men, we deserve nothing but Hell, but God gave Himself for a better way if we would only learn to follow His lead.

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
    Thanks Jim, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem speaks with such truth! I love how you lay out the difference between a world with God and one without - it really makes me think. The line "Adam, where are you?" at the end gives your poem such power. It feels like a call straight from God's heart reminding us of His grace. Your writing is full of faith and strength and I truly appreciate the message. What a blessing to read!

 Comment Written 03-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
    Thanks Michael, for these terrific comments and great review, blessings Roy