Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem is so enjoyable! I love how it captures the spirit of adventure.
The humor is great! Especially with the spicy food! The ending is just perfect. This was such a joy to read!

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 Comment Written 18-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2025

Thank you so much, I just imagine myself and my crazy urge for travel:)

Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Excellent

OMGosh, Iza, I think I just read the winner to this contest. It is so so cute. I love how you start out with packing a bag with no plans to stop. So much fun along the way and end up with no end in sight.

My favorite lines are, "At customs gates, her bags explode, Too many trinkets overload." How creative are you, dear friend? I loved it so much.
Already I have to hand over a virtual six!! It is so good. Remember that I named you the winner. I will be watching. LOL,, Lotsa love, Debi

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 Comment Written 17-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2025

Thank you so much Ms, Debi, and I recognize myself in this lady.