I saw a people marching
A poem40 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Wouldn't it be wonderful if everybody put on the armor of God and worked in unison for God. I would love to see that. Our world would be a much better place to live. Thank you for sharing this message with us.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Wouldn't it be wonderful if everybody put on the armor of God and worked in unison for God. I would love to see that. Our world would be a much better place to live. Thank you for sharing this message with us.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thanks Barbara, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Begin Again
Another moment when I stop and actually feel the words of your poem... they move through my body and mind telling me that this topsy turvy world we live in, will change when he returns and those who have placed their faith in him will find peace at last.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Another moment when I stop and actually feel the words of your poem... they move through my body and mind telling me that this topsy turvy world we live in, will change when he returns and those who have placed their faith in him will find peace at last.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thanks Carol, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from jim vecchio
One day, we who have believed will worship The Lord with all those who have accepted Him in our special home in Heaven. There will be no disagreements or points of variance; we will be of one accord.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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One day, we who have believed will worship The Lord with all those who have accepted Him in our special home in Heaven. There will be no disagreements or points of variance; we will be of one accord.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thanks Jim for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Roy,
It's sad that we have to fight. But it's because of Satan and his demons. They are our foes. And they are many. So, it's definitely not the way God wanted things to be. But Adam & Eve disobeyed in Eden. And we inherited sin. The world has been backward ever since. God had a different plan for us.
So, we are warriors today. Our best way to fight is in prayer, on our knees, in a constant battle. "For we do not wrestle against flesh and blood, but against the rulers, against the authorities, against the cosmic powers over this present darkness, against the spiritual forces of evil in the heavenly places. (Ephesians 6:12)
Nicely penned, Roy! The repetition of "I SAW A PEOPLE MARCHING" is quite effective.
One spot for spelling...
"THE LOVE OF GOD THEIR MANTLE,
THEIR CLOTHING WAS (THIER) PRAISE" ... (THEIR)
Blessings,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Hi Roy,
It's sad that we have to fight. But it's because of Satan and his demons. They are our foes. And they are many. So, it's definitely not the way God wanted things to be. But Adam & Eve disobeyed in Eden. And we inherited sin. The world has been backward ever since. God had a different plan for us.
So, we are warriors today. Our best way to fight is in prayer, on our knees, in a constant battle. "For we do not wrestle against flesh and blood, but against the rulers, against the authorities, against the cosmic powers over this present darkness, against the spiritual forces of evil in the heavenly places. (Ephesians 6:12)
Nicely penned, Roy! The repetition of "I SAW A PEOPLE MARCHING" is quite effective.
One spot for spelling...
"THE LOVE OF GOD THEIR MANTLE,
THEIR CLOTHING WAS (THIER) PRAISE" ... (THEIR)
Blessings,
Kimbob
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thanks Kim for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Roy,
This is a beautiful poem and tells a story of faith. Hopefully, this is how it will look when Jesus returns. He needs to come soon this world is an evil place.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Roy,
This is a beautiful poem and tells a story of faith. Hopefully, this is how it will look when Jesus returns. He needs to come soon this world is an evil place.
Cecilia
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thanks Cecilia for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You're welcome
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very good artwork and presentation, Roy.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery rhyme, and repeating phrase.
-You do a good job describing these people
who had "a single goal" and "marched as one."
-Their beliefs in the Lord are strong "And they are guided
By Father's mighty hand!"
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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-Very good artwork and presentation, Roy.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery rhyme, and repeating phrase.
-You do a good job describing these people
who had "a single goal" and "marched as one."
-Their beliefs in the Lord are strong "And they are guided
By Father's mighty hand!"
-Very well done.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thanks Pam for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are very welcome, Roy.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Roy,
What a wonderful use of repetition, rhyme and scripture references to get this religious poem marching on. It reminds us how lucky and interconnected believers are
to have strong faith and that this help faith spreads worldwide. This could be a modern day psalm.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your day.
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Hi Roy,
What a wonderful use of repetition, rhyme and scripture references to get this religious poem marching on. It reminds us how lucky and interconnected believers are
to have strong faith and that this help faith spreads worldwide. This could be a modern day psalm.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Enjoy the rest of your day.
Joan
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thanks Joan for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are most kindly welcome, Roy.
Joan
Comment from RJ Heritage
Good morning my friend, well rather good night, hope you are well. Thank you so much for this powerful and assertive message as we walk in Christ. I can't help but think you might have posted this before, but I stand corrected.
I really needed to hear these words today. I have been battling some demands on my work as a writer.
RJ
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Good morning my friend, well rather good night, hope you are well. Thank you so much for this powerful and assertive message as we walk in Christ. I can't help but think you might have posted this before, but I stand corrected.
I really needed to hear these words today. I have been battling some demands on my work as a writer.
RJ
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thanks RJ for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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Thank you, and you're very welcome
RJ
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Bless you
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My pleasure
RJ
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Roy, this is one of the best things I've read by you in a while. It's as if you went away for a time then came back refreshed and with a rekindled purpose for putting poetry to paper.
"I saw a people marching" -- in the army of God, guided by his hand and spanning the globe. And you've put it in all caps, which adds power and purpose to the words.
I enjoyed reading this very much, Roy.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Roy, this is one of the best things I've read by you in a while. It's as if you went away for a time then came back refreshed and with a rekindled purpose for putting poetry to paper.
"I saw a people marching" -- in the army of God, guided by his hand and spanning the globe. And you've put it in all caps, which adds power and purpose to the words.
I enjoyed reading this very much, Roy.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thanks Pam for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from kahpot
Loved this, I got an image of all people, everywhere, from every religion, and every race, all marching in the same direction, (oh wouldn't that be nice) a wonderful and very well written poem, it did just flow so well****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Loved this, I got an image of all people, everywhere, from every religion, and every race, all marching in the same direction, (oh wouldn't that be nice) a wonderful and very well written poem, it did just flow so well****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thanks Kahpot for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy
