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The Bible

A Short summary of this amazing book

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Comment from Lana Marie
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This is so good! I really enjoyed your Bible summary entry for this contest! It made me smile since I know all the stories you talk about and hopefully this will be a great seed sewn. In other people's hearts that read this that don't know him yet in a personal way. Nice job.!

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    Lana, thank you so very much for this lovely review and your kind words too. Thank you also for the generous six stars, my awesome friend. Also for starting the contest.
Comment from forestport12
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Interesting use of the prompt for a summary. I saw the word Bible and was curious to see how you summarize it. I'm a true believer in Jesus my savior. I once summarized the Bible in one sentence: It's a love story between God and man who sent his only son to save us. Blessings...

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    Hello Forest, I could have taken the easy way out and done exactly that. However, the prompt called to write a poem and that is what I did. It wasn't easy but I tried to cover more than just the love, which I said in the last two lines. I am a strong believer in Jesus Christ. After all, I think that is the most important thing God wanted us to acknowledge is what Jesus did for us.
    Thanks so much for reading and comments for my poem.
Comment from Jessica Borras
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Well, you definitely nailed the writing prompt! I'd say that's a pretty darn good summary of the Bible. And what a fun way to tell it! Good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
    Hi Jessica, I thank you for this very kind review and comments. You thoughtful words are so appreciated. Thanks for the good wishes for the contest.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem wonderfully shares the power of God's word. I love how you start with the creation story in Genesis. And end with the message of salvation through Jesus Christ. The way you highlight God's plan shows His love and sacrifice for us. The rhyme is so well done! This is well written. I truly felt His presence in your poem.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
    Hi Michael, I thank you for this very kind review and comments. You thoughtful words are so appreciated. Thanks for the good wishes for the contest.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the summarize writing prompt. That was the last book I expected to see a summry of and somehow you managed to do it and get all the important points in. Good job.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
    Hi Marilyn, I thank you for this very kind review and comments. You thoughtful words are so appreciated. Thanks for the good wishes for the contest.
Comment from royowen
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I guess we could say that the bible is the history of God's desire for a relationship with man, and because man failed in his ability to conform to the love that God has, God fixed it with Jesus, we still have free choice, but our disobedience can be sealed by faith in the obedience of Christ through the cross, beautifully written. Blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    So Mr Owens, where were you the last four hours. LOL.. just kidding, Roy. Hahaha. Sorry, I think having my mind on the Bible so much has me in a silly mood. Kind of carefree. We should always feel that way, just like the Bible or thinking about Jesus makes us feel. Thanks for letting me pick on you a little bit, my friend. (Big Smile)
reply by royowen on 21-Jan-2025
    Yes, He extended His hands to us, bless you
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    Hahaha, so glad you didn't mind me having a little fun with you. Yet, I was kind of serious too meaning that your way would have been a great way to summarize the Bible. Thanks!
reply by royowen on 21-Jan-2025
    Of course
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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This is a wonderful poem. It flows nicely from beginning to end. It is well organized and is very well written. You have summarized the bible quite nicely.

Great job and good luck in the contest.

Cecilia

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 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
    Hi Cecilia, I thank you for this very kind review and comments. You thoughtful words are so appreciated. Thanks for the good wishes for the contest.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 22-Jan-2025
    You're welcome