Spiritual Rhythm
A Lune of Spiritual art22 total reviews
Comment from Lana Marie
This is a really good lune poetry contest. I love that in your author notes you point out that it's also in an acrostic. I can almost hear the dripping of the raindrops on the roof.
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This is a really good lune poetry contest. I love that in your author notes you point out that it's also in an acrostic. I can almost hear the dripping of the raindrops on the roof.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Lana for the wonderful review.
Comment from Avery Daniel
This is a lovely poem. It's very cool that you spelled art within your poem. Within art, you created art. As for the poem, it was quite a brilliant display of words. I'm not truly one for short poems like this, but it was a good read. I don't have a single revision I would make to this piece. Fantastic!
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This is a lovely poem. It's very cool that you spelled art within your poem. Within art, you created art. As for the poem, it was quite a brilliant display of words. I'm not truly one for short poems like this, but it was a good read. I don't have a single revision I would make to this piece. Fantastic!
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind thoughts and review.
